From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 30 06:20:42 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8A05A16A4CE for ; Fri, 30 Jul 2004 06:20:42 +0000 (GMT) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (blackend.org [212.11.35.229]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 90DB843D55 for ; Fri, 30 Jul 2004 06:20:41 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by abigail.blackend.org (8.12.11/8.12.11) with ESMTP id i6U6KIiR062832 for ; Fri, 30 Jul 2004 08:20:18 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@abigail.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by abigail.blackend.org (8.12.11/8.12.11/Submit) id i6U6KIOA062831 for freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org; Fri, 30 Jul 2004 08:20:18 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc) Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2004 08:20:18 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Message-ID: <20040730062018.GB21106@abigail.blackend.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2.1i X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 4.10-PRERELEASE Subject: A problem in Handbook's Common Tasks part X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2004 06:20:42 -0000 Hello, I found something "annoying" in the introduction of the Common Tasks part, I read: "Describe the X Window System in more detail, and introduce you to modern desktop environments such as GNOME and KDE." The X Window System, GNOME and KDE are described in X11 chapter of the previous part "Getting Started". Since this sentence seems refering to the desktop chapter, I'd see something like: "Introduce you to popular and usesul desktop applications: browsers, productivity tools, document viewers, etc." instead of the current sentence. Well someone should be able to find a better text than mine :) Marc