Date: Sun, 22 Mar 2015 13:44:43 +0000 From: Alexey Dokuchaev <danfe@FreeBSD.org> To: Jimmy Olgeni <olgeni@FreeBSD.org> Cc: svn-ports-head@freebsd.org, svn-ports-all@freebsd.org, ports-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r381910 - in head: deskutils/docear devel/csoap games/xbattle graphics/whirlgif misc/metromap misc/whichman multimedia/smpeg2 net/exabgp net/tableutil sysutils/bontmia sysutils/clonehdd... Message-ID: <20150322134443.GA67200@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <201503221322.t2MDMrcO094256@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201503221322.t2MDMrcO094256@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Sun, Mar 22, 2015 at 01:22:53PM +0000, Jimmy Olgeni wrote: > New Revision: 381910 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/381910 > QAT: https://qat.redports.org/buildarchive/r381910/ > > Log: > Fix minor typos in pkg-descr files. As usual, thanks for doing this Jimmy! Few observations, if you permit: > Modified: head/misc/metromap/pkg-descr > ============================================================================== > --- head/misc/metromap/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/misc/metromap/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ > -Metromap is a simple pygtk+2 programm for finding pathes in metro(subway) maps. > +Metromap is a simple pygtk+2 program for finding paths in metro(subway) maps. ^ Missing space before opening parenthesis. I suspect there might be few similar mistakes throughout the tree, so they better be fixed together in one go, not on per-port basis. > Maps for Moscow, St. Petersburg, Kiev, London and Berlin are included. ^ Missing comma before "and". While a minor (and arguable) issue, we tend to respect Oxford comma in FreeBSD. > ============================================================================== > --- head/sysutils/clonehdd/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/sysutils/clonehdd/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ > Tool for copy partitions to another HDD. FreeBSD stores its data on > -partitions, which incapsulated in slices. Soft, such as Partition > +partitions, which encapsulated in slices. Soft, such as Partition > Magic, Acronis, etc. detect only slice, not real partitions on that > -slice. CloneHDD correctly understand size diference between two HDD > +slice. CloneHDD correctly understand size difference between two HDD > and change size of each partition proportionally for filling entire > HDD. Wow, this file definitely abuses whitespace way to much. :) > Modified: head/x11-fonts/croscorefonts-fonts-ttf/pkg-descr > ============================================================================== > --- head/x11-fonts/croscorefonts-fonts-ttf/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/x11-fonts/croscorefonts-fonts-ttf/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ > Google has created a set of fonts for its ChromeOS Operating system. > > The three standard ones closely mimic the most popular ones for the Windows > -platform and the linuxso-called Liberation fonts but are available under an > +platform and the linux so-called Liberation fonts but are available under an "Linux" should should start with an upper-case letter in this case. Preceding definite article IMHO should be dropped. > Modified: head/x11/stjerm/pkg-descr > ============================================================================== > --- head/x11/stjerm/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 12:59:46 2015 (r381909) > +++ head/x11/stjerm/pkg-descr Sun Mar 22 13:22:52 2015 (r381910) > @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ > -Stjerm is a quake-like terminal emulator. It's window is shown with a key > +Stjerm is a quake-like terminal emulator. Its window is shown with a key Since "quake" refers to the game here, it should start with an upper-case letter (Quake) as well. ./danfe
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