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Date:      Wed, 2 Sep 2015 22:58:12 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r47349 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization
Message-ID:  <201509022258.t82MwC82076111@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: wblock
Date: Wed Sep  2 22:58:11 2015
New Revision: 47349
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47349

Log:
  Add <acronym> tags to all the terms that need them.  Use
  wordlist-recommended form of CD-ROM where it occurs.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml	Wed Sep  2 22:56:34 2015	(r47348)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml	Wed Sep  2 22:58:11 2015	(r47349)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 
     <para>Virtualization software allows multiple operating systems to
       run simultaneously on the same computer.  Such software systems
-      for PCs often involve a host operating system which runs the
+      for <acronym>PC</acronym>s often involve a host operating system which runs the
       virtualization software and supports any number of guest
       operating systems.</para>
 
@@ -183,14 +183,14 @@
 
       <para>After the &os; virtual machine has been created, &os;
 	can be installed on it.  This is best done with an official
-	&os; CD/DVD or with an ISO image downloaded from an official
-	FTP site.  Copy the appropriate ISO image to the local &mac;
-	filesystem or insert a CD/DVD in the &mac;'s CD drive.  Click
+	&os; <acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> or with an <acronym>ISO</acronym> image downloaded from an official
+	<acronym>FTP</acronym> site.  Copy the appropriate <acronym>ISO</acronym> image to the local &mac;
+	filesystem or insert a <acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> in the &mac;'s <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> drive.  Click
 	on the disc icon in the bottom right corner of the &os;
 	<application>Parallels</application> window.  This will bring
-	up a window that can be used to associate the CDROM drive in
-	the virtual machine with the ISO file on disk or with the real
-	CDROM drive.</para>
+	up a window that can be used to associate the <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> drive in
+	the virtual machine with the <acronym>ISO</acronym> file on disk or with the real
+	<acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> drive.</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
 	<imageobject>
@@ -198,10 +198,10 @@
 	</imageobject>
       </mediaobject>
 
-      <para>Once this association with the CDROM source has been
+      <para>Once this association with the <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> source has been
 	made, reboot the &os; virtual machine by clicking the reboot
 	icon.  <application>Parallels</application> will reboot with a
-	special BIOS that first checks if there is a CDROM.</para>
+	special <acronym>BIOS</acronym> that first checks if there is a <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym>.</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
 	<imageobject>
@@ -247,8 +247,7 @@
 	    <option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU
 	    utilization of &os; under the <application>Parallels
 	    </application> environment.  This is accomplished by
-	    adding the following line to <filename>
-	    /boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
+	    adding the following line to <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
 
 	  <programlisting>kern.hz=100</programlisting>
 
@@ -302,7 +301,7 @@
 	  PC</application></title>
 
       <para>The first step in installing &os; on
-	<application>Virtual PC </application> is to create a new
+	<application>Virtual PC</application> is to create a new
 	virtual machine for installing &os;.  Select
 	<guimenuitem>Create a virtual machine</guimenuitem> when
 	prompted:</para>
@@ -372,15 +371,15 @@
 
       <para>After the &os; virtual machine has been created, &os; can
 	be installed on it.  This is best done with an official &os;
-	CD/DVD or with an ISO image downloaded from an official FTP
-	site.  Copy the appropriate ISO image to the local &windows;
-	filesystem or insert a CD/DVD in the CD drive, then double
+	<acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> or with an <acronym>ISO</acronym> image downloaded from an official <acronym>FTP</acronym>
+	site.  Copy the appropriate <acronym>ISO</acronym> image to the local &windows;
+	filesystem or insert a <acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> in the <acronym>CD</acronym> drive, then double
 	click on the &os; virtual machine to boot.  Then, click
 	<guimenu>CD</guimenu> and choose
 	<guimenu>Capture ISO Image...</guimenu> on the
 	<application>Virtual PC</application> window.  This will bring
-	up a window where the CDROM drive in the virtual machine can
-	be associated with an ISO file on disk or with the real CDROM
+	up a window where the <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> drive in the virtual machine can
+	be associated with an <acronym>ISO</acronym> file on disk or with the real <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym>
 	drive.</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
@@ -395,11 +394,11 @@
 	</imageobject>
       </mediaobject>
 
-      <para>Once this association with the CDROM source has been made,
+      <para>Once this association with the <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> source has been made,
 	reboot the &os; virtual machine by clicking
 	<guimenu>Action</guimenu> and <guimenu>Reset</guimenu>.
 	<application>Virtual PC</application> will reboot with a
-	special BIOS that first checks for a CDROM.</para>
+	special <acronym>BIOS</acronym> that first checks for a <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym>.</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
 	<imageobject>
@@ -419,7 +418,7 @@
       </mediaobject>
 
       <para>When the installation is finished, remember to eject the
-	CD/DVD or release the ISO image.  Finally, reboot into
+	<acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> or release the <acronym>ISO</acronym> image.  Finally, reboot into
 	the newly installed &os; virtual machine.</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
@@ -434,8 +433,7 @@
 	  PC</application></title>
 
       <para>After &os; has been successfully installed on
-	&microsoft.windows; with <application>Virtual PC
-	</application>, there are a number of configuration
+	&microsoft.windows; with <application>Virtual PC</application>, there are a number of configuration
 	steps that can be taken to optimize the system for
 	virtualized operation.</para>
 
@@ -448,7 +446,7 @@
 	    utilization of &os; under the
 	    <application>Virtual PC</application> environment.  This
 	    is accomplished by adding the following line to
-	    <filename> /boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
+	    <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
 
 	  <programlisting>kern.hz=100</programlisting>
 
@@ -552,7 +550,7 @@
       </mediaobject>
 
       <para>Choose the method to install the virtual machine, either
-	from an ISO image or from a CD/DVD:</para>
+	from an <acronym>ISO</acronym> image or from a <acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym>:</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
 	<imageobject>
@@ -601,8 +599,8 @@
 	</imageobject>
       </mediaobject>
 
-      <para>The status of the CDROM device.  Normally the
-	CD/DVD/ISO is disconnected from the virtual machine when it
+      <para>The status of the <acronym>CD-ROM</acronym> device.  Normally the
+	<acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym>/<acronym>ISO</acronym> is disconnected from the virtual machine when it
 	is no longer needed.</para>
 
       <mediaobject>
@@ -923,21 +921,21 @@ add path 'usb/*' mode 0660 group operato
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="virtualization-virtualbox-host-dvd-cd-access">
-      <title>&virtualbox; Host DVD/CD Access</title>
+      <title>&virtualbox; Host <acronym>DVD</acronym>/<acronym>CD</acronym> Access</title>
 
-      <para>Access to the host DVD/CD drives from guests is achieved
+      <para>Access to the host <acronym>DVD</acronym>/<acronym>CD</acronym> drives from guests is achieved
 	through the sharing of the physical drives.  Within
 	&virtualbox;, this is set up from the Storage window in the
 	Settings of the virtual machine.  If needed, create an empty
-	IDE CD/DVD device first.  Then choose the Host Drive from the
-	popup menu for the virtual CD/DVD drive selection.  A checkbox
+	<acronym>IDE</acronym> <acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> device first.  Then choose the Host Drive from the
+	popup menu for the virtual <acronym>CD</acronym>/<acronym>DVD</acronym> drive selection.  A checkbox
 	labeled <literal>Passthrough</literal> will appear.  This
 	allows the virtual machine to use the hardware directly.  For
-	example, audio CDs or the burner will only function if this
+	example, audio <acronym>CD</acronym>s or the burner will only function if this
 	option is selected.</para>
 
       <para><acronym>HAL</acronym> needs to run for
-	<application>&virtualbox;</application> DVD/CD functions to
+	<application>&virtualbox;</application> <acronym>DVD</acronym>/<acronym>CD</acronym> functions to
 	work, so enable it in <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> and
 	start it if it is not already running:</para>
 
@@ -946,7 +944,7 @@ add path 'usb/*' mode 0660 group operato
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service hald start</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>In order for users to be able to use
-	<application>&virtualbox;</application> DVD/CD functions, they
+	<application>&virtualbox;</application> <acronym>DVD</acronym>/<acronym>CD</acronym> functions, they
 	need access to <filename>/dev/xpt0</filename>,
 	<filename>/dev/cd<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>, and
 	<filename>/dev/pass<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename>.



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