From owner-svn-src-all@freebsd.org Thu Jan 18 22:20:32 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1CDFCEC6E80; Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from imp@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id EB52E14EF; Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from imp@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 20814248D7; Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from imp@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id w0IMKUWZ028382; Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:30 GMT (envelope-from imp@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from imp@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id w0IMKUsa028381; Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:30 GMT (envelope-from imp@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201801182220.w0IMKUsa028381@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: imp set sender to imp@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Warner Losh Date: Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:30 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r328154 - head/share/man/man9 X-SVN-Group: head X-SVN-Commit-Author: imp X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/share/man/man9 X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 328154 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: base MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 Jan 2018 22:20:32 -0000 Author: imp Date: Thu Jan 18 22:20:30 2018 New Revision: 328154 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/328154 Log: Make igor happier with this file: o Don't use contractions. o Add common after e.g. where needed Modified: head/share/man/man9/style.9 Modified: head/share/man/man9/style.9 ============================================================================== --- head/share/man/man9/style.9 Thu Jan 18 22:13:53 2018 (r328153) +++ head/share/man/man9/style.9 Thu Jan 18 22:20:30 2018 (r328154) @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ .\" From: @(#)style 1.14 (Berkeley) 4/28/95 .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd November 16, 2017 +.Dd January 18, 2018 .Dt STYLE 9 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ struct foo { struct foo *next; /* List of active foo. */ struct mumble amumble; /* Comment for mumble. */ int bar; /* Try to align the comments. */ - struct verylongtypename *baz; /* Won't fit in 2 tabs. */ + struct verylongtypename *baz; /* Does not fit in 2 tabs. */ }; struct foo *foohead; /* Head of global foo list. */ .Ed @@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ struct foo { LIST_ENTRY(foo) link; /* Use queue macros for foo lists. */ struct mumble amumble; /* Comment for mumble. */ int bar; /* Try to align the comments. */ - struct verylongtypename *baz; /* Won't fit in 2 tabs. */ + struct verylongtypename *baz; /* Does not fit in 2 tabs. */ }; LIST_HEAD(, foo) foohead; /* Head of global foo list. */ .Ed @@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ alphabetical unless there is a compelling reason to us ordering. .Pp Functions that are used locally in more than one module go into a -separate header file, e.g.\& +separate header file, e.g.,\& .Qq Pa extern.h . .Pp Do not use the @@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ Code which is unreachable for non-obvious reasons may .Bd -literal while ((ch = getopt(argc, argv, "abNn:")) != -1) switch (ch) { /* Indent the switch. */ - case 'a': /* Don't indent the case. */ + case 'a': /* Do not indent the case. */ aflag = 1; /* Indent case body one tab. */ /* FALLTHROUGH */ case 'b': @@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ not: .Pp Do not use .Ic \&! -for tests unless it is a boolean, e.g.\& use: +for tests unless it is a boolean, e.g.,\& use: .Bd -literal if (*p == '\e0') .Ed @@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ Old-style function declarations look like this: .Bd -literal static char * function(a1, a2, fl, a4) - int a1, a2; /* Declare ints, too, don't default them. */ + int a1, a2; /* Declare ints, too, do not default them. */ float fl; /* Beware double vs. float prototype differences. */ int a4; /* List in order declared. */ {