From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Sep 17 17:48:36 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0159816A41F; Sat, 17 Sep 2005 17:48:36 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B2C9543D45; Sat, 17 Sep 2005 17:48:35 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j8HHmZlm046876; Sat, 17 Sep 2005 17:48:35 GMT (envelope-from remko@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j8HHmZhh046875; Sat, 17 Sep 2005 17:48:35 GMT (envelope-from remko) Message-Id: <200509171748.j8HHmZhh046875@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Remko Lodder Date: Sat, 17 Sep 2005 17:48:35 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: www/en/projects newbies.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 17 Sep 2005 17:48:36 -0000 remko 2005-09-17 17:48:35 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en/projects newbies.sgml Log: Improve some grammar and improve minor nits. Submitted by: Daniel Gerzo Revision Changes Path 1.43 +8 -8 www/en/projects/newbies.sgml