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Subject: svn commit: r48213 -
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Author: jgh
Date: Fri Feb 19 21:57:38 2016
New Revision: 48213
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48213

Log:
  - address grammar
  
  PR:		207353
  Submitted by:	waclas@rpi.edu
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5357

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml	Fri Feb 19 21:55:52 2016	(r48212)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml	Fri Feb 19 21:57:38 2016	(r48213)
@@ -5396,7 +5396,7 @@ run_rc_command "$1"</programlisting>
 	<step>
 	  <para>Make sure there is no
 	    <literal>KEYWORD: &os;</literal> present.  This has
-	    not been necessary or desirable for years.  It is also
+	    not been necessary nor desirable for years.  It is also
 	    an indication that the new script was copy/pasted from
 	    an old script, so extra caution must be given to the
 	    review.</para>