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Date: Sun, 23 Jun 2002 16:10:32 +0300
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
To: Bruce Newland <newlandb@corp.earthlink.net>
Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: Error on doc web page
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On 2002-06-15 14:21 +0000, Bruce Newland wrote:
> Morning guys,
> Just happened to notice a error in grammar here:
> http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.html#vers
> ionbump
> The last sentence doesn't quite make sense. Is there supposed to be a "more"
> at the location I marked with *? and a "than" at the second *?

Fixed in revision 1.29 of file
doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.sgml

Thanks :-)

- Giorgos


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