From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Thu Dec 14 06:11:38 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1C623E97668; Thu, 14 Dec 2017 06:11:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E4EBE75A30; Thu, 14 Dec 2017 06:11:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id vBE6BaGH000149; Thu, 14 Dec 2017 06:11:36 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id vBE6Ba2P000148; Thu, 14 Dec 2017 06:11:36 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201712140611.vBE6Ba2P000148@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: eadler set sender to eadler@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Eitan Adler Date: Thu, 14 Dec 2017 06:11:36 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r51306 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: eadler X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 51306 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 14 Dec 2017 06:11:38 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Thu Dec 14 06:11:36 2017 New Revision: 51306 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51306 Log: building-products: clean up a little bit - remove the keyword soup that claims that FreeBSD still supports IPX, ATM, EISA, and related. - remove the word 'advanced' used way too often (and untruthfully now-a-days) - make 'available technology' not a goal of the document, thus making it easier to keep up to date and reasonable - wordsmith the abstract a bit Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.xml Wed Dec 13 19:50:44 2017 (r51305) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.xml Thu Dec 14 06:11:36 2017 (r51306) @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Abstract - The FreeBSD project is a worldwide, voluntary, and + The FreeBSD project is a worldwide, volunteer based, and collaborative project, which develops a portable and high-quality operating system. The FreeBSD project distributes the source code for its product under a liberal license, with the @@ -110,10 +110,6 @@ Project and its organizational structure. - An overview of the available technology in the - project. - - An understanding of its development model and release engineering processes. @@ -286,30 +282,6 @@ - Support for the following technologies, protocols - and standards: - ATA, ATAPI, - ATM, Bluetooth, - CAM, CardBus, - DHCP, DNS, - EISA, - Ethernet, FDDI, - Fibre Channel, GPIB, IEEE 1394, IPv4, - IPv6, IPSEC, - IPX, ISDN, - MAC, NIS, - NFS, OpenSSH, OPIE, - PAM, PCI, - PCMCIA, POSIX, - PnP, RAID, - RPC, SATA, - SCSI, SMB, - TCP, USB, - VESA, VLAN, - VLB, - WebNFS. - - A modular symmetric multiprocessing capable kernel, with loadable kernel modules and a flexible and easy to use configuration system. @@ -328,21 +300,21 @@ environment. - Advanced security features: Mandatory Access + Security features: Mandatory Access Control (&man.mac.9;), jails (&man.jail.2;), ACLs, and in-kernel cryptographic device support. - Advanced networking features: firewall-ing, QoS + Networking features: firewall-ing, QoS management, high-performance TCP/IP networking with - support for many advanced features. + support for many extensions. FreeBSD's in-kernel Netgraph (&man.netgraph.4;) framework allows kernel networking modules to be connected together in flexible ways. - Support for advanced storage technologies: Fibre + Support for storage technologies: Fibre Channel, SCSI, software and hardware RAID, ATA and SATA. @@ -626,7 +598,7 @@ This speeds up arg reduction by a factor of 2 for |x| FreeBSD. For example: Track FreeBSD source code - The project makes it easy to mirror its SVN + The project makes it easy to mirror its SVN repository using svnsync. Having the complete history of the source is useful when