From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Sat Oct 1 13:07:06 2016 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D8BD0C05E6E; Sat, 1 Oct 2016 13:07:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from linimon@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 91A6410DF; Sat, 1 Oct 2016 13:07:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from linimon@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id u91D75Dd003991; Sat, 1 Oct 2016 13:07:05 GMT (envelope-from linimon@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from linimon@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id u91D75lK003990; Sat, 1 Oct 2016 13:07:05 GMT (envelope-from linimon@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201610011307.u91D75lK003990@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: linimon set sender to linimon@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Mark Linimon Date: Sat, 1 Oct 2016 13:07:05 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r49444 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 01 Oct 2016 13:07:06 -0000 Author: linimon Date: Sat Oct 1 13:07:05 2016 New Revision: 49444 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49444 Log: Fix some awkward wording and style problems. PR: 213061 Reviewed by: allanjude Approved by: allanjude Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Fri Sep 30 18:33:07 2016 (r49443) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Sat Oct 1 13:07:05 2016 (r49444) @@ -21,6 +21,9 @@

Choosing an Architecture

+

Most users of &os; will have hardware for either the amd64, + i386, or armv6 architectures.

+

Modern PCs use the amd64 architecture, including those with Intel® branded processors. Computers with more than 3 GB of memory should use amd64. If the computer is an @@ -29,6 +32,10 @@ Bone Black, Panda Board, and Zed Board, use the armv6 SD card image which supports ARMv6 and ARMv7 processors.

+

All other users should reference the + complete list + of supported &os; platforms.

+

Choosing an Image

@@ -38,7 +45,7 @@ (bootonly) sized ISO Disc Images, as well as regular and mini USB memory stick images. Later versions of &os; are also offered as prebuilt - expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Cards for embedded + expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Card images for embedded platforms.

@@ -329,7 +336,7 @@

If you plan on getting &os; via HTTP or FTP, please check the listing of mirror - sites in the handbook to see if there is a site + sites in the Handbook to see if there is a site closer to you.