From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Jan 29 8: 4:29 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from server.baldwin.cx (jobaldwi.campus.vt.edu [198.82.67.146]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8C6AE14E91; Sat, 29 Jan 2000 08:04:25 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from john.baldwin.cx (john [10.0.0.2]) by server.baldwin.cx (8.9.3/8.9.3) with ESMTP id LAA44589; Sat, 29 Jan 2000 11:04:23 -0500 (EST) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <200001291604.LAA44589@server.baldwin.cx> X-Mailer: XFMail 1.4.0 on FreeBSD X-Priority: 3 (Normal) Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <20000129144357.A94214@catkin.nothing-going-on.org> Date: Sat, 29 Jan 2000 11:04:23 -0500 (EST) From: John Baldwin To: Nik Clayton Subject: Re: General cleanup of the Committers Guide Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On 29-Jan-00 Nik Clayton wrote: > On Mon, Jan 24, 2000 at 02:18:46PM -0500, John Baldwin wrote: >> I've gone through and given the committers guide a small overhaul and would >> appreciate any feedback on the patch. The patch can be found at: >> >> http://www.freebsd.org/~jhb/patches/cg.patch > > 404 not found. > > Feel free to e-mail them to me. Oh, I went ahead and committed them after 3 days, should I wait longer in the future?: jhb 2000/01/27 07:31:38 PST Modified files: en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide article.sgml Log: Patch to the committers guide including several grammar fixes, markup fixes, and re-wordings to try and make the text clearer. I also expanded several contractions, mentioned Bill Fenner's whodid script, and added a couple of clarifications. Reviewed by: obrien, nbm Reviewed by: Will Andrews Revision Changes Path 1.16 +80 -77 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml > N > -- > If you want to imagine the future, imagine a tennis shoe stamping > on a penguin's face forever. > --- with apologies to George Orwell -- John Baldwin -- http://www.FreeBSD.org/~jhb/ PGP Key: http://www.cslab.vt.edu/~jobaldwi/pgpkey.asc "Power Users Use the Power to Serve!" - http://www.FreeBSD.org/ To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message