From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 29 19:36:00 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 34339106566B; Tue, 29 May 2012 19:36:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::2c]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1EE8C8FC20; Tue, 29 May 2012 19:36:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q4TJZxHv098390; Tue, 29 May 2012 19:35:59 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q4TJZx21098388; Tue, 29 May 2012 19:35:59 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201205291935.q4TJZx21098388@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Tue, 29 May 2012 19:35:59 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Cc: Subject: svn commit: r38933 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 29 May 2012 19:36:00 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Tue May 29 19:35:59 2012 New Revision: 38933 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38933 Log: Expand some contractions and fix minor punctuation and usage problems. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Tue May 29 19:24:26 2012 (r38932) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Tue May 29 19:35:59 2012 (r38933) @@ -4265,7 +4265,7 @@ OPT6_DESC= Describe OPT6NLS option as include NLS support does not help the - user who can already see the option name but may not + user, who can already see the option name but may not know what it means. Describing it as Native Language Support via gettext utilities is much more helpful. @@ -4413,12 +4413,12 @@ CONFIGURE_ARGS+= --enable-foo In the example above, imagine a library libfoo is - installed on the system. User does not want this + installed on the system. The user does not want this application to use libfoo, so he toggled the option off in the make config dialog. But the application's configure script detects the library present in the system and includes its support in the resulting - executable. Now when user decides to remove libfoo from the + executable. Now when the user decides to remove libfoo from the system, the ports system does not protest (no dependency on libfoo was recorded) but the application breaks. @@ -6356,7 +6356,7 @@ do-configure: build target. Qt applications often are written to be cross-platform - and often X11/Unix isn't the platform they are developed on, + and often X11/Unix is not the platform they are developed on, which in turn often leads to certain loose ends, like: @@ -6377,7 +6377,7 @@ do-configure: Bogus installation paths. Sometimes data such as icons or .desktop files are by - default installed into directories which aren't scanned + default installed into directories which are not scanned by XDG-compatible applications. editors/texmaker is an example for this - look at @@ -8909,7 +8909,7 @@ CFLAGS+= -DLUA_VERSION_STRING="${VER_STR The port requires SeaMonkey as a runtime dependency. Possible values: yes (get default version), 20, - 11 (deprecated, shouldn't be used + 11 (deprecated, should not be used any more). Default dependency is on version 20. @@ -8927,7 +8927,7 @@ CFLAGS+= -DLUA_VERSION_STRING="${VER_STR The port requires Thunderbird as a runtime dependency. Possible values: yes (get default version), 31, - 30 (deprecated, shouldn't be used + 30 (deprecated, should not be used any more). Default dependency is on version 31. @@ -10075,7 +10075,7 @@ as .putsy.conf and edit it. Tinderbox - If you're an avid ports contributor, you might want to + If you are an avid ports contributor, you might want to take a look at Tinderbox. It is a powerful system for building and testing ports based on the scripts used on 7.0-RELEASE, and 7.0-CURRENT after ABI backwards compatibility to the FreeBSD 4/5/6 versions of the PCIOCGETCONF, PCIOCREAD and PCIOCWRITE IOCTLs was - MFC'ed, which required the ABI of the PCIOCGETCONF + MFCed, which required the ABI of the PCIOCGETCONF IOCTL to be broken again