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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: Re: A problem in Handbook's Common Tasks part
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On 2004-07-30 08:20, Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> wrote:
>
> I found something "annoying" in the introduction of the Common Tasks
> part, I read:
>
> "Describe the X Window System in more detail, and introduce you to
> modern desktop environments such as GNOME and KDE."
>
> The X Window System, GNOME and KDE are described in X11 chapter of
> the previous part "Getting Started".  Since this sentence seems refering
> to the desktop chapter, I'd see something like:
>
> "Introduce you to popular and usesul desktop applications: browsers,
> productivity tools, document viewers, etc."

Yep, this one seems much better.

Good catch!

:-)