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From: Mark Ovens <mark@ukug.uk.freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html
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The following reply was made to PR docs/19186; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Mark Ovens <mark@ukug.uk.freebsd.org>
To: dannyboy@subdimension.com
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html
Date: Sun, 11 Jun 2000 00:33:11 +0100

 On Sat, Jun 10, 2000 at 07:17:26PM -0400, Daniel Harris wrote:
 > 
 
 [snip]
 
 > @@ -236,7 +229,7 @@
 >      <p>If you like reading BSD manuals online, here is a hypertext version of
 >        the 4.4BSD documents from <a
 >  	href="file:/usr/share/doc">/usr/share/doc</a>, where you would find
 > -      the documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the doc distribution was
 > +      the documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the doc distribution were
 >        installed).</p>
 >        
 >        <a name="info"></a>
 > @@ -246,7 +239,7 @@
 >      <p>If you like reading FreeBSD Info documents online, here is a hypertext
 >        version of the Info documents from <a
 >  	href="file:/usr/share/info">/usr/share/info</a>, where you would find
 > -      the Info documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the info distribution was
 > +      the Info documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the info distribution were
 >        installed).</p>
 >  
 >        <a name="source"></a>
 
 Surely "was" is correct here? "distribution" is singular, you wouldn't
 say "if it were installed" would you?
 
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