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From: Dima Dorfman <dd@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 16 Apr 2001 18:37:49 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics
         chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig chapter.sgml
         doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kerneldebug chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors
         chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ports chapter.sgml ...
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  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking 
                                                        chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kerneldebug chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ports chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml 
    en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they
  do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?).  Stuff inside
  <question> tags in the mini-faq's and clearly-attributed blocks was
  left alone.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.38      +48 -39    doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
  1.24      +8 -8      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml
  1.40      +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
  1.31      +3 -4      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
  1.114     +4 -9      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
  1.115     +2 -2      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
  1.34      +8 -8      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
  1.32      +3 -3      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
  1.42      +16 -15    doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
  1.24      +5 -5      doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml


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