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Date:      Wed, 19 Mar 2014 13:19:47 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r44283 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers
Message-ID:  <201403191319.s2JDJlDR046423@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: dru
Date: Wed Mar 19 13:19:46 2014
New Revision: 44283
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44283

Log:
  Editorial review of iSCSI target section.
  
  Sponsored by: iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 19 13:13:29 2014	(r44282)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 19 13:19:46 2014	(r44283)
@@ -5696,18 +5696,18 @@ Logging to FILE /var/log/messages</scree
 	native target.</para>
       </note>
 
-	<para>Configuring an <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> target is
-	  straightforward: create the
+	<para>To configure an <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> target,
+	  create the
 	  <filename>/etc/ctl.conf</filename> configuration file, add
-	  an appropriate line to <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> to
-	  make sure the <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
+	  a line to <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> to
+	  make sure the &man.ctld.8;
 	  daemon is automatically started at boot, and then start the
 	  daemon.</para>
 
-	<para>A simple <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctl.conf&amp;sektion=5&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctl.conf(5)</link>;
-	  configuration file looks like this:</para>
+	<para>The following is an example of a simple
+	  <filename>/etc/ctl.conf</filename>
+	  configuration file.  Refer to &man.ctl.conf.5; for a more
+	  complete description of this file's available options.</para>
 
 	<programlisting>portal-group pg0 {
 	discovery-auth-group no-authentication
@@ -5726,95 +5726,86 @@ target iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 {
 }</programlisting>
 
 	<para>The first entry defines the <literal>pg0</literal>
-	  portal group.  Portal groups define network addresses the
-	  <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
-	  daemon will listen on.  <literal>discovery-auth-group
-	  no-authentication</literal> means that every initiator is
-	  allowed to perform <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> SendTargets
-	  discovery without any authentication.  The following two
-	  lines make <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
+	  portal group.  Portal groups define which network addresses the
+	  &man.ctld.8;
+	  daemon will listen on.  The <literal>discovery-auth-group
+	  no-authentication</literal> entry indicates that any initiator is
+	  allowed to perform <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> target
+	  discovery without authentication.  Lines three and four
+	  configure &man.ctld.8; to
 	  listen on all <acronym>IPv4</acronym>
 	  (<literal>listen 0.0.0.0</literal>) and
 	  <acronym>IPv6</acronym> (<literal>listen [::]</literal>)
-	  addresses on the default port (3260).  It is not necessary
-	  to define a new portal group; there is a default one, called
-	  <literal>default</literal>.  The difference between
-	  <literal>default</literal> and <literal>pg0</literal> above
-	  is that with <literal>default</literal>, the
-	  <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> SendTargets discovery is always
-	  denied, while with <literal>pg0</literal> it is always
+	  addresses on the default port of 3260.</para>
+ 
+	<para>It is not necessary
+	  to define a portal group as there is a built-in portal group called
+	  <literal>default</literal>.  In this case, the difference between
+	  <literal>default</literal> and <literal>pg0</literal>
+	  is that with <literal>default</literal>, target
+	  discovery is always
+	  denied, while with <literal>pg0</literal>, it is always
 	  allowed.</para>
 
 	<para>The second entry defines a single
-	  <emphasis>target</emphasis>.  <quote>Target</quote> has two
-	  meanings: it is a machine serving <acronym>iSCSI</acronym>,
-	  but also a named group of <acronym>LUNs</acronym>.  In this
-	  example, we use the latter meaning.
+	  target.  Target has two possible
+	  meanings: a machine serving <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> or
+	  a named group of <acronym>LUNs</acronym>.  This
+	  example uses the latter meaning, where
 	  <literal>iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0</literal> is the
-	  target name.  For testing purposes it can be left as is;
-	  otherwise, <literal>com.example</literal> should be changed
-	  to the real domain name, reversed; the
-	  <literal>2012-06</literal> is the year and month of
+	  target name.  This target name is suitable for testing purposes.
+	  For actual use, change <literal>com.example</literal>
+	  to the real domain name, reversed.  The
+	  <literal>2012-06</literal> represents the year and month of
 	  acquiring control of that domain name, and
-	  <literal>target0</literal> can be pretty much whatever.  Any
-	  number of targets can be defined in the configuration
+	  <literal>target0</literal> can be any value.  Any
+	  number of targets can be defined in this configuration
 	  file.</para>
 
-	<para><literal>auth-group no-authentication</literal> allows
-	  all initiators to connect to this target.
+	<para>The <literal>auth-group no-authentication</literal> line allows
+	  all initiators to connect to the specified target and
 	  <literal>portal-group pg0</literal> makes the target
 	  reachable through the <literal>pg0</literal> portal
 	  group.</para>
 
-	<para>After that come <acronym>LUNs</acronym>.  To the
+	<para>The next section defines the <acronym>LUN</acronym>.  To the
 	  initiator, each <acronym>LUN</acronym> will be visible as a
-	  separate disk device, like <filename>/dev/da0</filename>,
-	  <filename>/dev/da1</filename> and so on.  Multiple
+	  separate disk device.  Multiple
 	  <acronym>LUNs</acronym> can be defined for each target.
-	  <acronym>LUNs</acronym> are identified by numbers;
-	  <acronym>LUN</acronym> 0 is mandatory.  The first line of
-	  <acronym>LUN</acronym> configuration
-	  (<literal>path /data/target0-0</literal>) defines the full
-	  path to a file or ZVOL backing the <acronym>LUN</acronym>.
-	  The file must exist before starting <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>.
-	  The second line is optional and specifies the size.</para>
+	  Each <acronym>LUN</acronym> is identified by a number, where
+	  <acronym>LUN</acronym> 0 is mandatory.  The
+	  <literal>path /data/target0-0</literal> line defines the full
+	  path to a file or zvol backing the <acronym>LUN</acronym>.
+	  That path must exist before starting &man.ctld.8;.
+	  The second line is optional and specifies the size of the
+	  <acronym>LUN</acronym>.</para>
 
-	<para>To make sure <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
+	<para>Next, to make sure the &man.ctld.8;
 	  daemon is started at boot, add this line to
 	  <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>ctld_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
-	<para>On a new server being configured as
-	  <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> target, <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
-	  can be started by running this command as <systemitem
-	    class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
+	<para>To start &man.ctld.8; now,
+	  run this command:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service ctld start</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>The <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
-	  daemon reads <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctl.conf&amp;sektion=5&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctl.conf(5)</link>;
-	  file when started.  To make configuration changes take
-	  effect immediately, force <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ctld&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">ctld(8)</link>;
-	  to reread it:</para>
+	<para>As the &man.ctld.8;
+	  daemon is started, it reads <filename>/etc/ctl.conf</filename>.
+	  If this file is edited after the daemon starts, use this
+	  command so that the changes take
+	  effect immediately:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service ctld reload</userinput></screen>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Authentication</title>
 
-	<para>The example above is inherently insecure: it uses no
-	  authentication whatsoever, granting anyone full access to
-	  all targets.  To require username and password to access
-	  targets, modify the configuration:</para>
+	<para>The previous example is inherently insecure as it uses no
+	  authentication, granting anyone full access to
+	  all targets.  To require a username and password to access
+	  targets, modify the configuration as follows:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>auth-group ag0 {
 	chap username1 secretsecret
@@ -5839,12 +5830,13 @@ target iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 {
 	<para>The <literal>auth-group</literal> section defines
 	  username and password pairs.  An initiator trying to connect
 	  to <literal>iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0</literal> must
-	  specify either of those.  The SendTargets discovery is still
-	  permitted without any kind of authentication; to change it,
-	  set <literal>discovery-auth-group</literal> to something
-	  else.</para>
+	  first specify a defined username and secret.  However, target discovery is still
+	  permitted without authentication.  To require target discovery authentication,
+	  set <literal>discovery-auth-group</literal> to a defined
+	  <literal>auth-group</literal> name instead of
+	  <literal>no-authentication</literal>.</para>
 
-	<para>A common case for <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> is to have a
+	<para>It is common to define a
 	  single exported target for every initiator.  As a shorthand
 	  for the syntax above, the username and password can be
 	  specified directly in the target entry:</para>
@@ -5868,8 +5860,7 @@ target iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 {
 	<para>The current <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator is
 	  supported starting with &os; 10.0-RELEASE.  To use the
 	  <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> initiator available in older
-	  versions, refer to <link
-	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscontrol&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+10-current">iscontrol(8)</link>.
+	  versions, refer to &man.iscontrol.8;.
 	  This chapter only applies to the new initiator.</para>
       </note>
 



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