From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Jan 23 15:23:43 2003 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9718B37B401; Thu, 23 Jan 2003 15:23:42 -0800 (PST) Received: from pittgoth.com (14.zlnp1.xdsl.nauticom.net [209.195.149.111]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8D2A843F1E; Thu, 23 Jan 2003 15:23:41 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from moble.pittgoth.com (acs-24-154-229-196.zoominternet.net [24.154.229.196]) by pittgoth.com (8.12.6/8.12.6) with SMTP id h0NNNV6w023938; Thu, 23 Jan 2003 18:23:32 -0500 (EST) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Thu, 23 Jan 2003 18:23:36 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes To: swear@attbi.com (Gary W. Swearingen) Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, mwm@mired.org Subject: Re: docs/35951; disklabel(8) patch; PLEASE REVIEW Message-Id: <20030123182336.071d87e5.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: References: X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 0.8.6claws (GTK+ 1.2.10; i386-portbld-freebsd5.0CUR) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On 22 Jan 2003 11:45:34 -0800 swear@attbi.com (Gary W. Swearingen) wrote: > I've made a 1300-line patch for disklabel(8) which I'm sure I will > need some more work, especially if someone(s) will be kind enough as > to review it and provide comments. > > You can find the thing with > http://home.attbi.com/~swear/freebsd/disklabel.8.diff > http://home.attbi.com/~swear/freebsd/disklabel.8.mdoc > http://home.attbi.com/~swear/freebsd/disklabel.8.html > > After it gets reviewed/changed, I'd like to make a couple moves: > > -- The "Examples" section up to between "Description" and > "Files" (instead of between "Saved File Format" and "See Also"). > (That doesn't give my preferred order, but this seems better, > while generally following tradition.) > -- "Initializing/Formatting..." subsection to "NOTES" section > because it doesn't belong with the command descriptions as now. > -- "Enabling and disabling ..." section to above the "Writing a > disk label" section. (Gotta enable before writing.) > > I based many changes on testing and code review. I know it could say > more about some things, but I've added about all I care to. > > If this ever gets closed, docs/35948 can be closed too. > I'm really likeing this, but will need a free hour or so to really review it. Save me a spot ;) -- Tom Rhodes To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message