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Author: bjk
Date: Wed Apr 20 03:34:18 2016
New Revision: 48680
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48680

Log:
  Editorial tweaks to the 2016Q1 report
  
  Remove some unnecessary quotes, and use &quot; where they remain.
  (Also sprinkle some more <tt>.)
  
  Try to use title case for <url> descriptions, and convert a few
  FreeBSD into &os;.
  
  And more.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml	Wed Apr 20 01:10:07 2016	(r48679)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml	Wed Apr 20 03:34:18 2016	(r48680)
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="http://www.viva64.com/en/b/0377/">PVS-Studio delved into the FreeBSD kernel</url>
+      <url href="http://www.viva64.com/en/b/0377/">PVS-Studio Delved into the FreeBSD kernel</url>
       <url href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5245">PVS Static Analysis Phabricator Review</url>
     </links>
 
@@ -221,18 +221,18 @@
 
       <p>Work is ongoing with respect to development of pNFS support
 	for the NFS server using GlusterFS as a back end.  This will
-	be a long term project with the eventual goal of allowing the
+	be a long-term project with the eventual goal of allowing the
 	NFS server to scale beyond a single server system.  Hopefully
 	it will be available for testing in late Spring 2016.  pNFS
-	allows a NFSv4.1 client to do reads/writes directly to a data
+	allows an NFSv4.1 client to do reads/writes directly to a data
 	server and not the NFS server.</p>
     </body>
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>Development of the pNFS server will be in need of testing
-	  or it will never progress to a near production status.  I
-	  hope to have code available in FreeBSD's subversion projects
+	<p>The pNFS server will be in need of testing during development
+	  or it will never progress to a near-production status.  I
+	  hope to have code available in &os;'s Subversion project
 	  branch for testing in late spring 2016.</p>
       </task>
     </help>
@@ -252,21 +252,22 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="https://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/powerpcspe/">Source tree</url>
+      <url href="https://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/powerpcspe/">Source Tree</url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>The purpose of this is to enable use of the Signal Processing
+      <p>This project aims to enable the use of the Signal Processing
 	Engine found in the NXP/Freescale e500v2 SoC.  The SPE uses
-	opcodes overlapping with Altivec, so is mutually exclusive.
-	Additionally, the e500v2 does not have a traditional FPU, and
-	instead uses the SPE for all floating point operations (or
-	emulation as is currently done).  Combined with the fact that
-	the SPE ABI is incompatible with traditional ABI, a new
-	MACHINE_ARCH is created to address this.</p>
+	opcodes overlapping with those of Altivec, so they are mutually
+	exclusive.  Additionally, the e500v2 does not have a traditional
+	FPU, and instead uses the SPE for all floating point operations
+	(or emulation, as is currently done).  Combined with the fact
+	that the SPE ABI is incompatible with the traditional ABI, a new
+	MACHINE_ARCH has been created to address these
+	incompatibilities.</p>
 
-      <p>A project branch has been created with the work.  A
-	powerpcspe kernel boots on the RouterBoard RB800, and base
+      <p>A project branch has been created for the work.  A
+	powerpcspe kernel boots on the RouterBoard RB800, and the base
 	utilities run properly.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -294,12 +295,12 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/Graphics">Graphics stack roadmap and supported hardware matrix</url>
-      <url href="https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports-graphics">Ports development tree on GitHub</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/Graphics">Graphics Stack Roadmap and Supported Hardware Matrix</url>
+      <url href="https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports-graphics">Ports Development Tree on GitHub</url>
       <url href="https://fosdem.org/2016/schedule/event/freebsd_graphic_stack/">FreeBSD Graphics Team at FOSDEM 2016</url>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_link_.2Fdev_entries_to_sysctl_nodes">GSoC 2016: link /dev entries to sysctl nodes</url>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_redesign_and_rewrite_libdevq">GSoC 2016: redesign libdevq</url>
-      <url href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">Graphics team blog</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_link_.2Fdev_entries_to_sysctl_nodes">GSoC 2016: link <tt>/dev</tt> Entries to <tt>sysctl</tt> Nodes</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_redesign_and_rewrite_libdevq">GSoC 2016: Redesign <tt>libdevq</tt></url>
+      <url href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">Graphics Team Blog</url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
@@ -307,7 +308,8 @@
 	driver in the kernel!  The driver now matches Linux 3.8.13, so
 	it includes initial Haswell support.  Linux 3.8 is already
 	three years old, but work continues to upgrade DRM further.
-	In particular, the move to <tt>linuxkpi</tt> was started.</p>
+	In particular, work commenced to move to using the
+	<tt>linuxkpi</tt> compatibility.</p>
 
       <p>In the Ports tree, Mesa was updated to 11.1.2. The next minor
 	release, 11.2.0, is ready for testing in our development tree.
@@ -321,21 +323,22 @@
 	how people can contribute.  It was well received and the
 	presentation was followed by interesting discussions.  FOSDEM
 	was also a nice occasion to meet and talk again to the nice
-	"upstream" developers of the graphics stack.</p>
+	upstream developers of the graphics stack.</p>
 
       <p>For the first year, we added two ideas for GSoC 2016: one for
 	a kernel task, one to redesign <tt>libdevq</tt>.  Six students
-	submitted a proposal for those two ideas, that was unexpected!
+	submitted proposals for those ideas; that was unexpected!
 	We now need to decide which one we want to mentor and the
 	choice is difficult.</p>
 
-      <p>Our blog has moved to
-	<a href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">Graphics Team blog</a>.</p>
+      <p>Our blog has moved to a
+	<a href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">new location</a>
+	(linked above).</p>
     </body>
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>See the "Graphics" wiki page for up-to-date
+	<p>See the &quot;Graphics&quot; wiki page for up-to-date
 	  information.</p>
       </task>
     </help>
@@ -367,11 +370,11 @@
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>Allwinner SoC are used in multiple hobbyist devboards and
-	single board computers.  Recently, support for these SoC have
+      <p>Allwinner SoCs are used in multiple hobbyist devboards and
+	single-board computers.  Recently, support for these SoCs has
 	received a lot of updates</p>
 
-      <p>Task done during first quarter :</p>
+      <p>Task done during first quarter:</p>
 
       <ul>
 	<li>I2C</li>
@@ -397,13 +400,13 @@
 	<li>A20 now uses the ARM Generic Timer</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>Ongoing task :</p>
+      <p>Ongoing tasks:</p>
 
       <ul>
-	<li>Switch to new clock framework
+	<li>Switch to a new clock framework
 	  <a href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5752">(In review)</a></li>
 
-	<li>Convert A10 interrupt controller to INTRNG
+	<li>Convert the A10 interrupt controller to INTRNG
 	  <a href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5573">(In review)</a></li>
 
 	<li>OHCI support
@@ -417,7 +420,7 @@
 
 	<li>USB OTG</li>
 
-	<li>Finish the switch to upstream DTS</li>
+	<li>Finish the switch to using upstream DTS files</li>
 
 	<li>A83T SoC Support</li>
 
@@ -521,7 +524,7 @@
 
 
     <body>
-      <p>Since the last report &os; support for ThunderX has been
+      <p>Since the last report, &os; support for ThunderX has been
 	significantly improved and stabilized.  Semihalf contributions
 	include the following items:</p>
 
@@ -531,14 +534,14 @@
 	  maintained.</li>
 
 	<li>Moved to using <tt>pci_host_generic.c</tt> as a main
-	  driver for the internal PCIe bridge.  Significant rework of
-	  PCIe code to support both generic and ThunderX based
-	  platforms.</li>
+	  driver for the internal PCIe bridge.  This involved a
+	  significant rework of PCIe code to support both generic and
+	  ThunderX based platforms.</li>
 
-	<li> Serious networking performance boost and bug fixes: </li>
+	<li> Serious networking performance boost and bug fixes:</li>
 	  <ul>
-	    <li>Fixed race condition on Rx path causing very rare
-	      ‘use after free’ issue</li>
+	    <li>Fixed race condition on Rx path causing a very rare
+	      &quot;use after free&quot; issue</li>
 
 	    <li>Hardware L3 and L4 checksums support</li>
 
@@ -553,7 +556,7 @@
       </ul>
 
       <p>The driver supports all available Ethernet connections (1,
-	10, 30 Gbps) and system can saturate 10 Gbps link (on Tx)
+	10, 30 Gbps) and the system can saturate a 10 Gbps link (on Tx)
 	using 4 CPU cores.</p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -570,7 +573,7 @@
 	  </ul>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>This work is integrated to the FreeBSD HEAD on an on-going
+      <p>This work is integrated to &os; HEAD on an on-going
 	basis.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -584,7 +587,7 @@
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>Support for multi Queue Set operation in VNIC</p>
+	<p>Add support for multi-Queue Set operation in VNIC.</p>
       </task>
     </help>
   </project>