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Author: rene
Date: Mon Feb 11 00:06:40 2013
New Revision: 40926
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40926

Log:
  Some 'igor -z' improvements.
  
  Approved by:	gjb (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/newbus/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/newbus/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/newbus/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 00:05:51 2013	(r40925)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/newbus/chapter.xml	Mon Feb 11 00:06:40 2013	(r40926)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 
       <para>A device driver is a software component which provides the
 	interface between the kernel's generic view of a peripheral
-	(e.g. disk, network adapter) and the actual implementation of
+	(e.g., disk, network adapter) and the actual implementation of
 	the peripheral.  The <emphasis>device driver interface
 	(DDI)</emphasis> is the defined interface between the kernel
 	and the device driver component.</para>
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
       Alpha's ISA bus device.  On IA-32, ISA and PCI interrupts are
       both managed by the top-level nexus device.  For both ports,
       memory and port address space is managed by a single entity -
-      nexus for IA-32 and the relevant chipset driver on Alpha (e.g.
+      nexus for IA-32 and the relevant chipset driver on Alpha (e.g.,
       CIA or tsunami).</para>
 
     <para>In order to normalize access to memory and port mapped