From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jan 9 18:26:08 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5DCCF1065677; Mon, 9 Jan 2012 18:26:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 338708FC1C; Mon, 9 Jan 2012 18:26:08 +0000 (UTC) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q09IQ83X092786; Mon, 9 Jan 2012 18:26:08 GMT (envelope-from wblock@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q09IQ8EN092785; Mon, 9 Jan 2012 18:26:08 GMT (envelope-from wblock) Message-Id: <201201091826.q09IQ8EN092785@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Mon, 9 Jan 2012 18:26:08 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 09 Jan 2012 18:26:08 -0000 wblock 2012-01-09 18:26:08 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml Log: Narrow an overwide table, clarify some wording, fix header filenames in programlistings so they consistently end with a colon, split some long sentences in two, remove some extraneous commas and words, make a reference to the Developers Handbook a link, and fix title capitalization. Approved by: gjb (mentor) Revision Changes Path 1.31 +32 -30 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.sgml