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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
Subject: Re: svn commit: r46440 - in head:
 en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide share/xml
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On Fri, 3 Apr 2015, Eitan Adler wrote:

> Author: eadler
> Date: Fri Apr  3 01:33:54 2015
> New Revision: 46440
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46440
>
> Log:
>  committer-guide:
>  	- move perks into a question rather than its own section
>  	- stop directing people to email me directly and instead direct people
>  	  to email the liasion alias
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
>  head/share/xml/authors.ent
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Fri Apr  3 01:18:57 2015	(r46439)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Fri Apr  3 01:33:54 2015	(r46440)
> @@ -3531,7 +3531,7 @@ Relnotes:           yes</programlisting>
>       <title>Policy on Multiple Architectures</title>
>
>       <para>&os; has added several new architecture ports during
> -	recent release cycles and is truly no longer an &i386; centric
> +	recent release cycles and is truly no longer a &i386; centric

The first form was more correct.

> +	<answer>
> +	  <para>Recognition as a competent software engineer is the
> +	    longest lasting value.  In addition, getting to a chance

Extra "to".

> +	    to work with some of the best people that every engineer
> +	    would dream to meet is a great perk!</para>

"...an engineer would dream of meeting..."?