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From: Felix-Antoine Paradis <reel@sympatico.ca>
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To: Warner Losh <imp@harmony.village.org>
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Subject: Re: Suggested update to motd
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On Sun, 22 Jul 2001, Warner Losh wrote:

>
> This is closer to reality, and adds a plug for the security advisory
> list to the mix.
>
> Comments?

On the first added line, you got: "...errata information for "??" are
at..." What is going between "for" and "are"? Is the "for" forgotten?

>
> Index: motd
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/imp/FreeBSD/CVS/src/etc/motd,v
> retrieving revision 1.15
> diff -u -r1.15 motd
> --- motd	2001/03/22 17:58:20	1.15
> +++ motd	2001/07/22 21:55:55
> @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
>
>  Before seeking technical support, please use the following resources:
>
> -o  Security advisories and updated errata information for all releases are
> -   at http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/ - always consult the ERRATA section
> -   for your release first as it's updated frequently.
> +o  Security advisories and updated errata information for are at
> +   http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/ in the ERRATA section by release.
> +   Subscribe to freebsd-security-notifications@freebsd.org for advisories.
>
>  o  The Handbook and FAQ documents are at http://www.FreeBSD.org/ and,
>     along with the mailing lists, can be searched by going to



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