From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 12 20:07:29 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 55D69106567C for ; Tue, 12 May 2009 20:07:29 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ulf.lilleengen@gmail.com) Received: from mail-ew0-f159.google.com (mail-ew0-f159.google.com [209.85.219.159]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D37CA8FC40 for ; Tue, 12 May 2009 20:07:28 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ulf.lilleengen@gmail.com) Received: by ewy3 with SMTP id 3so270055ewy.43 for ; Tue, 12 May 2009 13:07:27 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=NMjyt8N8jIZcsBEoE3+AMQvcNalPEUlqOMbtuoXFFSE=; b=XWusgHYBXdJsM/yBuS0oILp5SmelJcJBb1UUoKYJcs/I6YhgoN0GmoQe7nEraIAKpQ w1rXqqvrZCwqzzVsE1Y5wNLTHVxTuK4LN9Fnx4jCZwf5bLxl3n0yb5XazhfZUX2GFdyU Qy3fUge0lE258XYYhQe9POo3KlpmJi0dXb+v8= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject :x-enigmail-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=Uk7Tmrk/RDssxd0obUW5sGUOLtghcTixtqziFYE5evEjfcnHIW5DKXko6ZygFnjRZL BaO2KoR1x88krDPLRItHWkrJD3+hLVA3kqbkZXfLz2xWdrIzFZbWQNp0pfLJBxHK9C5I uc0sgYY8ydc7GnvA07/LIwkGsJAH+ibQPV5QE= Received: by 10.216.3.206 with SMTP id 56mr40592weh.99.1242157590169; Tue, 12 May 2009 12:46:30 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ?192.168.1.102? (z032069.its-s.tudelft.nl [145.94.32.69]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id 10sm913102eyz.31.2009.05.12.12.46.28 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Tue, 12 May 2009 12:46:29 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <4A09D211.5000701@FreeBSD.org> Date: Tue, 12 May 2009 21:46:25 +0200 From: Ulf Lilleengen User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.21 (X11/20090424) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Enigmail-Version: 0.95.6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Subject: [Review request] improving (g)vinum documentation X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 12 May 2009 20:07:31 -0000 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Hi, As part of SoC 2007, I extended the gvinum documentation in the handbook with some examples that I would like to commit. It would be good if someone could review the language. Thanks! Patch here: http://people.freebsd.org/~lulf/patches/doc/vinum_doc.diff - -- Ulf Lilleengen -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.11 (FreeBSD) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org iEYEARECAAYFAkoJ0hAACgkQCILg8nMIdCUvogCdGRQUD6XF4eFQh7VDeMVSIBNV CwcAn39eUekpAqwZV2qYkLb+Phy4LA4Y =HmDu -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----