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Author: bjk
Date: Sun Oct 25 20:03:01 2015
New Revision: 47663
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47663

Log:
  Remove draft notice from the 2015Q3 report
  
  Also a couple of minor editing tweaks.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml	Sun Oct 25 19:04:05 2015	(r47662)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-07-2015-09.xml	Sun Oct 25 20:03:01 2015	(r47663)
@@ -15,11 +15,6 @@
   <section>
     <title>Introduction</title>
 
-    <p><strong>This is a draft of the July&ndash;September 2015
-      status report.  Please check back after it is finalized, and
-      an announcement email is sent to the &os;-Announce mailing
-      list.</strong></p>
-
     <p>The third quarter of 2015, from July to September, was
       again a period of busy activity for &os;: for the second quarter
       in a row we have the largest report yet published.</p>
@@ -48,7 +43,7 @@
       attention and improvements, with <tt>truss</tt> and
       (<tt>k</tt>)<tt>gdb</tt> receiving significant overhauls, new
       implementations for the man page tools being brought in, the
-      website receiving a new skin, and a brand new infrastructure for
+      website receiving a new skin, and a brand new system for
       translating documentation that greatly lowers the barrier to
       entry.</p>
 
@@ -1229,7 +1224,7 @@
 	    <li>a TCP client based on <tt>lwip</tt> and
 	      <tt>vme</tt></li>
 
-	    <li>a TCP server based on <tt>socket(2)</tt>.</li>
+	    <li>a TCP server based on <tt>socket(2)</tt></li>
 	  </ul>
 	</li>
       </ol>