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From: "Rodney W. Grimes" <freebsd-rwg@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net>
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Subject: Re: svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd
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To: Hiroki Sato <hrs@freebsd.org>
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> "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> wrote
>   in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>:
> 
> ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or

I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones
I have seen attempted.  Oh, remove the s from accepts.


> ya> >> something?
> ya> > 
> ya> > Yeah, that?s more accurate.
> ya> 
> ya> How about this?
> ya> -Ngie
> ya> 
> ya> $ svn diff usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8
> ya> Index: usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8
> ya> ===================================================================
> ya> --- usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8  (revision 314585)
> ya> +++ usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8  (working copy)
> ya> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
> ya>  .Ar service
> ya>  of
> ya>  .Ql \&*
> ya> -allows packets to be received from any UDP port.
> ya> +allows UDP packets to be sent with any source port.
> ya>  The default
> ya>  .Ar service
> ya>  is
> 
>  Looks good to me though probably I am not the best person who can
>  judge an English expression as good or bad...
> 
> -- Hiroki
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Rod Grimes                                                 rgrimes@freebsd.org