From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Jan 31 9:30: 9 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0DD5137B400 for ; Thu, 31 Jan 2002 09:30:02 -0800 (PST) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g0VHU2e27194; Thu, 31 Jan 2002 09:30:02 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats) Date: Thu, 31 Jan 2002 09:30:02 -0800 (PST) Message-Id: <200201311730.g0VHU2e27194@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Cc: From: Tom Rhodes Subject: Re: docs/34328: Minor corrections to kernelconfig Reply-To: Tom Rhodes Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/34328; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Tom Rhodes To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/34328: Minor corrections to kernelconfig Date: Thu, 31 Jan 2002 12:33:35 -0500 Recently looking this over, we have 2 prs for the kernelconfig chapter, they will cancell each other out in line variances, and i'm going to combine them... I see your logic in this, but I will point out a few things that I don't agree with: you have: vi and ee which will work, yes, but the sentence does not push the user to look at a command, in hence, it sounds more like you want to refer to a utility or application. The new patch will hug vi and ee in the tags. You have make world when the FDP primer requests the use of as "make world" is more of a target. Some of your other ideas I agree with, mainly the grammer, but I will submit a patch with your changes, my changes and cover pr: 34137 in it... Thanks for pointing these out! -- Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes www.Pittgoth.com Gothic Liberation Front www.FreeBSD.org The Power To Serve To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message