From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Dec 8 22:28:05 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EF744F26; Sat, 8 Dec 2012 22:28:05 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from madpilot@FreeBSD.org) Received: from winston.madpilot.net (winston.madpilot.net [78.47.75.155]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 13A1A8FC13; Sat, 8 Dec 2012 22:28:05 +0000 (UTC) Received: from winston.madpilot.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by winston.madpilot.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3YJlYZ5pkDzFTsk; Sat, 8 Dec 2012 23:28:02 +0100 (CET) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at madpilot.net Received: from winston.madpilot.net ([127.0.0.1]) by winston.madpilot.net (winston.madpilot.net [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id vGFPvJQE545F; Sat, 8 Dec 2012 23:28:00 +0100 (CET) Received: from tommy.madpilot.net (host102-105-dynamic.30-79-r.retail.telecomitalia.it [79.30.105.102]) by winston.madpilot.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA; Sat, 8 Dec 2012 23:28:00 +0100 (CET) Message-ID: <50C3BEEF.5070809@FreeBSD.org> Date: Sat, 08 Dec 2012 23:27:59 +0100 From: Guido Falsi User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; FreeBSD amd64; rv:17.0) Gecko/17.0 Thunderbird/17.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Eitan Adler Subject: Re: Patch for porter's handbook References: <50C3AEE6.3020101@FreeBSD.org> <50C3B788.6050809@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------030409050502040805080505" Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, bapt@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 08 Dec 2012 22:28:06 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------030409050502040805080505 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On 12/08/12 23:04, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 8 December 2012 16:56, Guido Falsi wrote: >> On 12/08/12 22:22, Eitan Adler wrote: >>> >>> On 8 December 2012 16:19, Guido Falsi wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi! >>>> Some time ago the maintainer of net-mgmt/mrtg noticed that the porter's >>>> handbook still reference NOPORTDOCS in place of the new DOCS option in >>>> optionsng. >>>> >>>> I have a patch(attached) which fixes this. bapt has already seen it and >>>> approved it, as suggested by him I added a tag around "DOCS". >>>> >>>> I'd like this patch to be revised by someone of the documentation team >>>> and >>>> approved for committing it. I'm obviously accepting any comment or >>>> correction. >>> >>> >>> The content changes look good. However, please don't make whitespace / >>> formatting changes in the same patch as this makes it harder to figure >>> out what changed for both the reviewers and translators. >>> >> >> Good point. Here is a revised patch with only the content changes included. > > Looks good to me. > > Not your text but: > > "and neither would be added to port packing list" doesn't sound quite > right. Try replacing "and neither would be" with "or". > Done. final patch for approval attached. -- Guido Falsi --------------030409050502040805080505 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii; name="porthand.diff" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="porthand.diff" SW5kZXg6IGVuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29rcy9wb3J0ZXJzLWhhbmRib29rL2Jvb2sueG1s Cj09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09 PT09PT09PT09PT09PT0KLS0tIGVuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29rcy9wb3J0ZXJzLWhhbmRi b29rL2Jvb2sueG1sCShyZXZpc2lvbiA0MDMwNykKKysrIGVuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29r cy9wb3J0ZXJzLWhhbmRib29rL2Jvb2sueG1sCSh3b3JraW5nIGNvcHkpCkBAIC00OTIyLDEx ICs0OTIyLDExIEBACiAJICA8bWFrZXZhcj5QS0dOQU1FPC9tYWtldmFyPi48L3BhcmE+CiAK IAk8cGFyYT5NYWtlIHRoZSBpbnN0YWxsYXRpb24gZGVwZW5kZW50IG9uIHRoZSB2YXJpYWJs ZQotCSAgPG1ha2V2YXI+Tk9QT1JURE9DUzwvbWFrZXZhcj4gc28gdGhhdCB1c2VycyBjYW4g ZGlzYWJsZSBpdAorCSAgPGxpdGVyYWw+RE9DUzwvbGl0ZXJhbD4gb3B0aW9uIHNvIHRoYXQg dXNlcnMgY2FuIGRpc2FibGUgaXQKIAkgIGluIDxmaWxlbmFtZT4vZXRjL21ha2UuY29uZjwv ZmlsZW5hbWU+LCBsaWtlIHRoaXM6PC9wYXJhPgogCiAJPHByb2dyYW1saXN0aW5nPnBvc3Qt aW5zdGFsbDoKLS5pZiAhZGVmaW5lZChOT1BPUlRET0NTKQorLmlmICR7UE9SVF9PUFRJT05T Ok1ET0NTfQogCSR7TUtESVJ9ICR7RE9DU0RJUn0KIAkke0lOU1RBTExfTUFOfSAke1dSS1NS Q30vZG9jcy94dmRvY3MucHMgJHtET0NTRElSfQogLmVuZGlmPC9wcm9ncmFtbGlzdGluZz4K QEAgLTQ5NjgsMTMgKzQ5NjgsMTMgQEAKIAk8L2l0ZW1pemVkbGlzdD4KIAogCTxub3RlPgot CSAgPHBhcmE+PG1ha2V2YXI+Tk9QT1JURE9DUzwvbWFrZXZhcj4gb25seSBjb250cm9scyBh ZGRpdGlvbmFsCisJICA8cGFyYT5UaGUgPGxpdGVyYWw+RE9DUzwvbGl0ZXJhbD4gb3B0aW9u IG9ubHkgY29udHJvbHMgYWRkaXRpb25hbAogCSAgICBkb2N1bWVudGF0aW9uIGluc3RhbGxl ZCBpbiA8bWFrZXZhcj5ET0NTRElSPC9tYWtldmFyPi4gIEl0CiAJICAgIGRvZXMgbm90IGFw cGx5IHRvIHN0YW5kYXJkIG1hbiBwYWdlcyBhbmQgaW5mbyBwYWdlcy4KIAkgICAgVGhpbmdz IGluc3RhbGxlZCBpbiA8bWFrZXZhcj5EQVRBRElSPC9tYWtldmFyPiBhbmQKIAkgICAgPG1h a2V2YXI+RVhBTVBMRVNESVI8L21ha2V2YXI+IGFyZSBjb250cm9sbGVkIGJ5Ci0JICAgIDxt YWtldmFyPk5PUE9SVERBVEE8L21ha2V2YXI+IGFuZAotCSAgICA8bWFrZXZhcj5OT1BPUlRF WEFNUExFUzwvbWFrZXZhcj4sIHJlc3BlY3RpdmVseS48L3BhcmE+CisJICAgIDxsaXRlcmFs PkRBVEE8L2xpdGVyYWw+IGFuZAorCSAgICA8bGl0ZXJhbD5FWEFNUExFUzwvbGl0ZXJhbD4g b3B0aW9ucywgcmVzcGVjdGl2ZWx5LjwvcGFyYT4KIAk8L25vdGU+CiAKIAk8cGFyYT5UaGVz ZSB2YXJpYWJsZXMgYXJlIGV4cG9ydGVkIHRvCkBAIC01MDA4LDEwICs1MDA4LDEwIEBACiAJ ICBpcyBsaXN0ZWQgaW4gPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IG9yIG1hdGNoZWQg YnkgYQogCSAgZ2xvYiBwYXR0ZXJuIGZyb20gdGhpcyB2YXJpYWJsZSwgdGhlIGVudGlyZSBz dWJ0cmVlIG9mCiAJICBjb250YWluZWQgZmlsZXMgYW5kIGRpcmVjdG9yaWVzIHdpbGwgYmUg cmVnaXN0ZXJlZCBpbiB0aGUKLQkgIGZpbmFsIHBhY2tpbmcgbGlzdC4gIElmIDxtYWtldmFy Pk5PUE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IGlzCi0JICBkZWZpbmVkIHRoZW4gZmlsZXMgYW5kIGRp cmVjdG9yaWVzIGxpc3RlZCBpbgotCSAgPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IHdv dWxkIG5vdCBiZSBpbnN0YWxsZWQgYW5kCi0JICBuZWl0aGVyIHdvdWxkIGJlIGFkZGVkIHRv IHBvcnQgcGFja2luZyBsaXN0LiAgSW5zdGFsbGluZyB0aGUKKwkgIGZpbmFsIHBhY2tpbmcg bGlzdC4gIElmIHRoZSA8bGl0ZXJhbD5ET0NTPC9saXRlcmFsPiBvcHRpb24gaGFzCisJICBi ZWVuIHVuc2V0IHRoZW4gZmlsZXMgYW5kIGRpcmVjdG9yaWVzIGxpc3RlZCBpbgorCSAgPG1h a2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IHdvdWxkIG5vdCBiZSBpbnN0YWxsZWQKKwkgIG9y IGFkZGVkIHRvIHBvcnQgcGFja2luZyBsaXN0LiAgSW5zdGFsbGluZyB0aGUKIAkgIGRvY3Vt ZW50YXRpb24gYXQgPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IGFzIHNob3duIGFib3Zl CiAJICByZW1haW5zIHVwIHRvIHRoZSBwb3J0IGl0c2VsZi4gIEEgdHlwaWNhbCBleGFtcGxl IG9mCiAJICB1dGlsaXppbmcgPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IGxvb2tzIGFz Cg== --------------030409050502040805080505--