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Subject: svn commit: r39844 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot
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Author: wblock
Date: Tue Oct 30 03:11:42 2012
New Revision: 39844
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39844

Log:
  Remove some redundant words that are handled by markup.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml	Tue Oct 30 02:56:37 2012	(r39843)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml	Tue Oct 30 03:11:42 2012	(r39844)
@@ -575,8 +575,8 @@ boot:</screen>
 	  <application>GNOME</application>,
 	  <application>KDE</application>, or
 	  <application>XFce</application> are installed, the X11
-	  desktop can be launched by using the
-	  <command>startx</command> command.</para>
+	  desktop can be launched by using
+	  <command>startx</command>.</para>
 
 	<para>Some users prefer the X11 graphical login screen over
 	  the traditional text based login prompt.  Display managers
@@ -852,7 +852,7 @@ bitmap_name="<replaceable>/boot/splash.b
       Stage 3 boot loader</link> prompt.  Variables can be added using
       <command>set</command>, removed with <command>unset</command>,
       and viewed with the <command>show</command> commands.  Variables
-      set in the <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> file can be
+      set in <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> can be
       overridden here also.  Device hints entered at the boot loader
       are not permanent and will be forgotten on the next
       reboot.</para>
@@ -860,8 +860,8 @@ bitmap_name="<replaceable>/boot/splash.b
     <para>Once the system is booted, the &man.kenv.1; command can be
       used to dump all of the variables.</para>
 
-    <para>The syntax for the <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename>
-      file is one variable per line, using the standard hash
+    <para>The syntax for <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename>
+      is one variable per line, using the standard hash
       <quote>#</quote> as comment markers.  Lines are constructed as
       follows:</para>