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On Thu, 1 Oct 2015, Dru Lavigne wrote:

> Author: dru
> Date: Thu Oct  1 09:42:40 2015
> New Revision: 47461
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47461
>
> Log:
>  Clarify GELI AES default keysize and that the defaults are probably fine.
>
>  PR: 201979
>  Submitted by: Tom "Ludensen" Christensen
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Thu Oct  1 04:54:31 2015	(r47460)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Thu Oct  1 09:42:40 2015	(r47461)
> @@ -2905,7 +2905,8 @@ geli_da2_flags="-p -k /root/<replaceable
> /dev/ada0s1b.eli	none		swap	sw		0	0</programlisting>
>
>       <para>By default, &man.geli.8; uses the <acronym>AES</acronym>
> -	algorithm with a key length of 256 bits.  These defaults can
> +	algorithm with a key length of 128 bits.  Normally the default
> +	settings will suffice.  However, if desired these defaults can

There should be a comma after "if desired", and that makes the "However" 
unnecessary:

   settings will suffice.  If desired, these defaults can

> 	be altered in the options field in
> 	<filename>/etc/fstab</filename>.  The possible flags
> 	are:</para>