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The following reply was made to PR docs/32578; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
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Subject: Re: docs/32578: [PATCH] for doc review
Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2002 15:54:42 -0500 (EST)

 diff -ru en.old/index.xsl en/index.xsl
 --- en.old/index.xsl	Tue Feb 19 15:28:13 2002
 +++ en/index.xsl	Tue Feb 19 15:52:40 2002
 @@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
  	
  	      <p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for
  		Intel ia32 compatible, DEC Alpha, and PC-98 architectures.
 -		It is derived from BSD UNIX, the version of UNIX developed at 
 +		It is derived from BSD UNIX, the version of UNIX developed at
  		the University of California, Berkeley.
  		It is developed and maintained by 
  		<a
 @@ -233,33 +233,36 @@
  		<a href="{$base}/platforms/index.html">platforms</a> are in
  		various stages of development.</p>
  	      
 -	      <h2><font color="#990000">Cutting edge features</font></h2>
 +	      <h2><font color="#990000">FreeBSD has cutting edge features</font></h2>
  	      
  	      <p>FreeBSD offers advanced networking, performance, security
  		and compatibility 
  		<a href="{$base}/features.html">features</a>
  		today which are still missing in other operating systems,
  		even some of the best commercial ones.</p>
 -	      
 -	      <h2><font color="#990000">Powerful Internet solutions</font></h2>
 +
 +	      <h2><font color="#990000">Industrial strength Networking</font></h2>
  	      
  	      <p>FreeBSD makes an ideal 
  		<a href="{$base}/internet.html">Internet or Intranet</a> 
  		server. It provides robust network services under the heaviest
  		loads and uses memory efficiently to maintain good response
 -		times for thousands of simultaneous user processes. Visit our
 +		time for thousands of simultaneous user processes. Visit our
  		<a href="gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> for examples of
 -		FreeBSD powered applications and services.</p>
 -	    
 -	      <h2><font color="#990000">Run a huge variety of
 -		  applications</font></h2>
 +		FreeBSD powered applications, servers, networks, and other services.</p>
 +
 +	      <h2><font color="#990000">FreeBSD has access to hundreds of applications
 +              </font></h2>
  	    
  	      <p>The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost,
  		high-speed PC hardware makes FreeBSD a very economical
  		alternative to commercial UNIX workstations.  It is well-suited
 -		for a great number of both desktop and server 
 -		<a href="{$base}/applications.html">applications</a>.</p>
 -	    
 +		for a great number of both desktop and server
 +		<a href="{$base}/applications.html">applications.</a>
 +                Imagine an entire developement environment
 +                right at your finger tips, with support for almost all of the major
 +                programming languages!.</p>
 +
  	      <h2><font color="#990000">Easy to install</font></h2>
  	    
  	      <p>FreeBSD can be installed from a variety of media including

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