From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jun 25 02:50:16 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A45028FF; Tue, 25 Jun 2013 02:50:16 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 86D831DAE; Tue, 25 Jun 2013 02:50:16 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r5P2oGLj033068; Tue, 25 Jun 2013 02:50:16 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r5P2oGKv033067; Tue, 25 Jun 2013 02:50:16 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201306250250.r5P2oGKv033067@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Tue, 25 Jun 2013 02:50:16 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42035 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Jun 2013 02:50:16 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Tue Jun 25 02:50:16 2013 New Revision: 42035 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42035 Log: Minor edits for punctuation and clarity. Space callouts to align evenly so they do not look like part of the content. Reviewed by: bjk, db (clarity of "what is a jail" part only) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Mon Jun 24 21:01:49 2013 (r42034) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml Tue Jun 25 02:50:16 2013 (r42035) @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ For that reason, compromising a service running in a chrooted environment should not allow the attacker to compromise the entire system. The &man.chroot.8; utility is good for easy - tasks, which do not require a lot of flexibility or complex and + tasks which do not require much flexibility or complex, advanced features. Since the inception of the chroot concept, however, many ways have been found to escape from a chrooted environment and, although they have been fixed in @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ jails were developed. Jails improve on the concept of the traditional - &man.chroot.2; environment, in several ways. In a traditional + &man.chroot.2; environment in several ways. In a traditional &man.chroot.2; environment, processes are only limited in the part of the file system they can access. The rest of the system resources (like the set of system users, the running processes, @@ -225,9 +225,8 @@ A command — the path name of an executable to run - inside the jail. This is relative to the root directory of - the jail environment, and may vary a lot, depending on the - type of the specific jail environment. + inside the jail. The path name is relative to the root directory of + the jail environment. @@ -257,12 +256,12 @@ the procedure for building a jail: &prompt.root; setenv D /here/is/the/jail -&prompt.root; mkdir -p $D +&prompt.root; mkdir -p $D &prompt.root; cd /usr/src -&prompt.root; make buildworld -&prompt.root; make installworld DESTDIR=$D -&prompt.root; make distribution DESTDIR=$D -&prompt.root; mount -t devfs devfs $D/dev +&prompt.root; make buildworld +&prompt.root; make installworld DESTDIR=$D +&prompt.root; make distribution DESTDIR=$D +&prompt.root; mount -t devfs devfs $D/dev