From owner-svn-src-all@freebsd.org Thu Mar 2 06:57:14 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AAF40CF5A92; Thu, 2 Mar 2017 06:57:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 858459B7; Thu, 2 Mar 2017 06:57:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id v226vDch045642; Thu, 2 Mar 2017 06:57:13 GMT (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from ngie@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id v226vDij045640; Thu, 2 Mar 2017 06:57:13 GMT (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201703020657.v226vDij045640@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: ngie set sender to ngie@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Ngie Cooper Date: Thu, 2 Mar 2017 06:57:13 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r314546 - head/share/man/man4 X-SVN-Group: head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 02 Mar 2017 06:57:14 -0000 Author: ngie Date: Thu Mar 2 06:57:13 2017 New Revision: 314546 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/314546 Log: Wordsmith mlx4{en,ib}(4) - Replace the "following lines" with more terse phrases. - Use .Lk for the mellanox URL. - Reword the SUPPORT section so it's less wordy. The DESCRIPTION section suggestions are still outstanding; improving the section requires additional review to make sure the nuance/message is correct per the original intent. Bump .Dd for the change Submitted by: wblock Sponsored by: Dell EMC Isilon Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D9241 Modified: head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 Modified: head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 ============================================================================== --- head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 Thu Mar 2 06:25:50 2017 (r314545) +++ head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 Thu Mar 2 06:57:13 2017 (r314546) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd January 18, 2017 +.Dd March 1, 2017 .Dt MLX4EN 4 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -32,8 +32,7 @@ .Nd "Mellanox ConnectX-3 10GbE/40GbE network adapter driver" .Sh SYNOPSIS To compile this driver into the kernel, -place the following lines in your -kernel configuration file: +place these lines in your kernel configuration file: .Bd -ragged -offset indent .Cd "options COMPAT_LINUXKPI" .Cd "device mlx4" @@ -41,13 +40,13 @@ kernel configuration file: .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a module at run-time, -run the following command as root: +run this command as root: .Bd -literal -offset indent kldload mlx4en .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a -module at boot time, place the following lines in +module at boot time, place this line in .Xr loader.conf 5 : .Bd -literal -offset indent mlx4en_load="YES" @@ -75,10 +74,10 @@ Mellanox ConnectX-3 (ETH) .Sh SUPPORT For general information and support, go to the Mellanox support website at: -.Pa http://www.mellanox.com/ . +.Lk http://www.mellanox.com/ . .Pp -If an issue is identified with this driver with a supported adapter, -email all the specific information related to the issue to +If an issue is identified with this driver and a supported network adapter, +please email the specific information to .Aq Mt freebsd-drivers@mellanox.com . .Sh SEE ALSO .Xr mlx4ib 4 , Modified: head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 ============================================================================== --- head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 Thu Mar 2 06:25:50 2017 (r314545) +++ head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 Thu Mar 2 06:57:13 2017 (r314546) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd January 18, 2017 +.Dd March 1, 2017 .Dt MLX4IB 4 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -32,8 +32,7 @@ .Nd "Mellanox ConnectX-3 10GbE/40GbE network adapter driver" .Sh SYNOPSIS To compile this driver into the kernel, -place the following lines in your -kernel configuration file: +place these lines in your kernel configuration file: .Bd -ragged -offset indent .Cd "options COMPAT_LINUXKPI" .Cd "device mlx4" @@ -41,13 +40,13 @@ kernel configuration file: .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a module at run-time, -run the following command as root: +run this command as root: .Bd -literal -offset indent kldload mlx4ib .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a -module at boot time, place the following lines in +module at boot time, place this line in .Xr loader.conf 5 : .Bd -literal -offset indent mlx4ib_load="YES" @@ -75,10 +74,10 @@ Mellanox ConnectX-3 (IB) .Sh SUPPORT For general information and support, go to the Mellanox support website at: -.Pa http://www.mellanox.com/ . +.Lk http://www.mellanox.com/ . .Pp -If an issue is identified with this driver with a supported adapter, -email all the specific information related to the issue to +If an issue is identified with this driver and a supported network adapter, +please email the specific information to .Aq Mt freebsd-drivers@mellanox.com . .Sh SEE ALSO .Xr mlx4en 4 ,