From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Sep 30 21:52:57 1995 Return-Path: owner-doc Received: (from root@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.6.12/8.6.6) id VAA05036 for doc-outgoing; Sat, 30 Sep 1995 21:52:57 -0700 Received: from fslg8.fsl.noaa.gov (fslg8.fsl.noaa.gov [137.75.131.171]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.6.12/8.6.6) with SMTP id VAA05031 for ; Sat, 30 Sep 1995 21:52:55 -0700 Received: by fslg8.fsl.noaa.gov (5.57/Ultrix3.0-C) id AA10245; Sun, 1 Oct 95 04:52:53 GMT Received: by emu.fsl.noaa.gov (1.38.193.4/SMI-4.1 (1.38.193.4)) id AA25961; Sat, 30 Sep 1995 22:52:52 -0600 Date: Sat, 30 Sep 1995 22:52:52 -0600 From: kelly@fsl.noaa.gov (Sean Kelly) Message-Id: <9510010452.AA25961@emu.fsl.noaa.gov> To: jfieber@indiana.edu Cc: doc@freebsd.org In-Reply-To: (message from John Fieber on Sat, 30 Sep 1995 23:35:57 -0500 (EST)) Subject: Re: Printing handbook chapter COMPLETE Sender: owner-doc@freebsd.org Precedence: bulk >>>>> "John" == John Fieber writes: John> This adds around 40 pages to the handbook and looks to be John> much more complete than any standard unix admin books I have John> around... So that extra BS in technical writing is finally paying off. John> The first sectioning tag should have been instead of John> I changed it and bumped the first 's up to John> 's. Fair enough, and thanks for making the adjustments. John> There was also one dead reference to BLAH, which I John> assumed you had intended to be printing:kernel. Again, if John> that was not right, we can change it. Ooops, thanks for catching that. I thought I cleaned them all out. Actually, that one (line 441) should've been a reference to the (not yet existent?) kernel configuration chapter. I just checked a realized there was one more BLAH that shouldn't have made it through. Could you take it out (line 931)? I'd recommend rewording like: For more information on the ... see the file ... . and just end the sentence there. John> Okay, now go change that. Take her a honeymoon getaway John> weekend somewhere. Already got tickets to Hawaii for later this month! John> (And don't sneak in any computer magazines.) Awwwwww ... :-( -- Sean Kelly NOAA Forecast Systems Laboratory, Boulder Colorado USA I went down the street to the 24-hour grocery. When I got there, the guy was locking the front door. I said, "Hey, the sign says you're open 24 hours." He said, "Yes, but not in a row." -- Steven Wright