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Hello!

Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> On Fri, Jan 14, 2005 at 08:31:30AM +0000, Denis Peplin wrote:
> 
>>den         2005-01-14 08:31:30 UTC
>>
>>  FreeBSD doc repository
>>
>>  Modified files:
>>    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml 
>>  Log:
>>  Do not say that ed loadable module is not available - it is available for
>>  both 4.X and 5.X
>>
> 
> 
> The "(ISA cards, for example)" sounds really weird, it does not match
> with the rest of the sentence since it talks about drivers.
Is this better?
-       network card drivers (ISA cards, for example).
+       network cards (ISA cards, for example).