From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Aug 30 16:04:34 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C99051065672; Sun, 30 Aug 2009 16:04:34 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from r.c.ladan@gmail.com) Received: from mail-ew0-f208.google.com (mail-ew0-f208.google.com [209.85.219.208]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 321208FC0A; Sun, 30 Aug 2009 16:04:33 +0000 (UTC) Received: by ewy4 with SMTP id 4so897954ewy.36 for ; Sun, 30 Aug 2009 09:04:33 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:sender:message-id:date:from :organization:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject:references :in-reply-to:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=fJRozmsAk+jy3ihJT58xclw2eWUplETCfLBE8JX3wRQ=; b=EYumiCrOzSdGgL2fdyMLx+rN+ww5oPZBIiYn+xoE/tKvGw4aFB18tGbBRA4lwdD4bC KMx+9Csxr17+EzS7lFyf7RYcNFzRlwcj3/iaeNCdQ6uLsPCJP/ePxRXF1fKCp1aVyboM kZBHpiy8wbcs9rbRxNuHXYdmiwA/63PJO0lQM= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=sender:message-id:date:from:organization:user-agent:mime-version:to :cc:subject:references:in-reply-to:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; b=BHN5d2TqJDTY7Uaiownl3xPUet+J99Kz4S6vLLZF2DgmJFJEnwS4v67JqlKfqVSXJY SfZ01zXVmCVOWRtDgtREy50Bnew44xFYGUZlSxCnInxDVQHTjiezxIfIlEYRX/n21BRU vFfJH1JWTJGmZOFVEQpHGO3gtkml6F3dwNrYw= Received: by 10.210.206.12 with SMTP id d12mr4076856ebg.32.1251648272907; Sun, 30 Aug 2009 09:04:32 -0700 (PDT) Received: from self.rene-ladan.nl (ip4da3ae31.direct-adsl.nl [77.163.174.49]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id 28sm2517675eyg.5.2009.08.30.09.04.31 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Sun, 30 Aug 2009 09:04:32 -0700 (PDT) Sender: Rene Ladan Message-ID: <4A9AA30F.6090202@freebsd.org> Date: Sun, 30 Aug 2009 18:04:31 +0200 From: Rene Ladan Organization: The FreeBSD Project User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.23 (X11/20090826) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Daniel Gerzo References: <4A9A8F33.6020209@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <4A9A8F33.6020209@FreeBSD.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 0.95.6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Article for review X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 30 Aug 2009 16:04:34 -0000 Daniel Gerzo schreef: > Hello guys, > > I am seeking for documentation, language and grammar review for a new > article describing steps required to use custom gcc from ports. The > article has been written by mm@ and I have just sgml-fied it. As both > Martin and me are not native english speakers, I would like someone to > review it before I do the commit. It has gone through a quick review > already, but an additional work may be still required. > > The diff is available at: > http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/custom-gcc.diff > > Built version is available at: > http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/gcc.html > I just read through the prebuilt version, which looks fine to me (I'm not native English either). Maybe you can replace gcc{43,44,45} with {previous,current,development} as much as possible so that the article doesn't need an update each time a new GCC version is released? It looks like it's worth to install gcc44 on my almost 3 year old Intel T5600 laptop to benefit from the SSE3 instructions :-) Regards, Rene -- http://www.rene-ladan.nl/ GPG fingerprint = ADBC ECCD EB5F A6B4 549F 600D 8C9E 647A E564 2BFC (subkeys.pgp.net)