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	Tweaked e.g. (italicized, and comma added), and added a 
missing word later. Submitted for your enjoyment....

--- cvs.operations.html Wed May 15 20:29:50 2002
+++ cvs.operations.html.fixed   Wed May 15 23:20:42 2002
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@

            <p>Arguments to <tt class="OPTION">-D</tt> and <tt class=
            "OPTION">-r</tt> are sticky, which means cvs will
-          remember them later, e.g. when you do a <tt class=
+          remember them later, <em>e.g.,</em> when you do a <tt class=
            "COMMAND">cvs update</tt>.</p>
          </li>

@@ -392,9 +392,9 @@
            <p>This updates the <tt class="FILENAME">shazam</tt> file
            or the contents of the <tt class="FILENAME">shazam</tt>
            directory to the latest version along the branch you
-          checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', does
-          nothing unless the tags have moved in the repository or
-          some other weird stuff is going on.</p>
+          checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', this
+          does nothing, unless the tags have moved in the repository
+          or some other weird stuff is going on.</p>

            <p>Useful options, in addition to those listed above for
            <tt class="COMMAND">checkout</tt>:</p>


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