From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Feb 18 21:52:14 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7929D444 for ; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 21:52:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-pb0-f44.google.com (mail-pb0-f44.google.com [209.85.160.44]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5308496C for ; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 21:52:14 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-pb0-f44.google.com with SMTP id wz12so1861825pbc.31 for ; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 13:52:13 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=odLsgT0hDiI77PbtRpKR0OClJaCTSm/PwF8afCpTdOQ=; b=PV6FVQ8qloNzO1LPIDJx9sTKTsqN99cDHjJlcgpgwXG92d2yUyqwk23Af5LYaT8wrT XzcqGx1VtEtcg+awwebf1tu9Jnqoese+yW7PpQ9p9Z4m0J/HqmngykYeZeut7fmH4t15 4lhfIxZKWbaRRzJbTs6eNi9fYs0eoN08faabk= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type :x-gm-message-state; bh=odLsgT0hDiI77PbtRpKR0OClJaCTSm/PwF8afCpTdOQ=; b=MJnJJyRHf/1VlPeCVHUsMgBSwx7ddZUlPX9v9MDrk3zb/FpBWXSfSza468cbBOAz4N y/QHVBySFRfRVey6gddax/UH8qYKa/IlLvH0b98RcZSpdKTYC6LblOmxEWVHzFByGQCk tq7oEWqyZmC8/H56GrrpuZ4u44FhFurJWfSDabRJFdgV9u1/oi07T5Q42JrouaMN1DSL XvTAMkcSgKvZFIwbj8QLE83YqmG1U9iHAn82Nl2m53QKL6/SO31XojP9+7BdrM8M7zsm LUBmCwUtX5guISSc0zvwPC3P98PSGgj8XEFFN+GhsTaI0zqmFB8QemJhO/iiqllyVTp4 6I2w== X-Received: by 10.68.201.227 with SMTP id kd3mr33598133pbc.65.1361224333523; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 13:52:13 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.66.158.169 with HTTP; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 13:51:43 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: References: <201302181954.r1IJsLmd095109@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Mon, 18 Feb 2013 16:51:43 -0500 X-Google-Sender-Auth: M1QMyZvYTjlFKh0DcCEs8a-6Ri8 Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors To: Benjamin Kaduk Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQmMXEpooizPoVZulKsrxcgzAcehdcXKjSyXqDgJo3ZPTAE4BBO2wnApUH7jO6XvGQoad8Kx Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 18 Feb 2013 21:52:14 -0000 On 18 February 2013 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > How is refusing bin and usr.bin relevant for people who only know English > and German (the part of the text above the quoted portion)? Ugh. In trying to preserve the useful portions of the documentation I trimmed too little. I'll re-read the document and see what else I could trim or re-write >> - With this very useful feature, those users who are on >> + With this very feature, those users who are on > > Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a useful > feature? ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly consistent with > our style.) Good point. I kept the wording that was there, but perhaps I should have been more aggressive. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams