From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Oct 9 01:25:23 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 05C04106566B for ; Sun, 9 Oct 2011 01:25:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from glenbarber.us (onyx.glenbarber.us [199.48.134.227]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 871C58FC12 for ; Sun, 9 Oct 2011 01:25:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 74388 invoked by uid 0); 8 Oct 2011 21:25:21 -0400 Received: from unknown (HELO schism.local) (gjb@76.124.49.145) by 0 with SMTP; 8 Oct 2011 21:25:21 -0400 Message-ID: <4E90F7FC.6000708@FreeBSD.org> Date: Sat, 08 Oct 2011 21:25:16 -0400 From: Glen Barber User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.6; rv:7.0.1) Gecko/20110929 Thunderbird/7.0.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Warren Block References: <201110090121.p991LrGl070116@repoman.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <201110090121.p991LrGl070116@repoman.freebsd.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.3.2 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="------------enigB99C5348B29C8362703B94F9" Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 09 Oct 2011 01:25:23 -0000 This is an OpenPGP/MIME signed message (RFC 2440 and 3156) --------------enigB99C5348B29C8362703B94F9 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 10/8/11 9:21 PM, Warren Block wrote: > wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC >=20 > FreeBSD doc repository >=20 > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml=20 > Log: > Various fixes: > "effective at improving performance" is correct in English. > "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded. > Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information. > Spelling/grammar. > Simplify Introducing bsdinstall. > Expand/clarify mirror site description choice. > Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you". > "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting". > Add link to network information. > =20 And it was approved by gjb :) --=20 Glen Barber | gjb@FreeBSD.org FreeBSD Documentation Project --------------enigB99C5348B29C8362703B94F9 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" Content-Description: OpenPGP digital signature Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (Darwin) iQEcBAEBCAAGBQJOkPgAAAoJEFJPDDeguUajmywH/jiOfnKLULTPZUfgq+8rEa9z C8SIzB5zG6U/zbAtvzJnfF7L8t+jDBoKwAUarjCFwUnMndFQg6B1XB2gefZ4/SpL T8uAJ5gvuiklTW3zJ2yCanz+oHL6y0WflGRAw/L0eFv4FmL6QX7jk2rk0xTN5tdA cZkE/1xHrzLYS2ljDuEfuFHqqdxZ6aXRQEgJbJUz1q8SXoDv+Jd280rAQVvtXBBk XxEATPFcL3s+iiDh7iLbZMYOpfstIuIUyAgv/To36bI42fxIUDffmF0Dz5YfykTo 3ESuqVgqYWGhDtPIO516d0OSkB3JG7u3mY6Q6dL64nw1P9Mp0uV8zKIrD0THMdM= =3ZE2 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------enigB99C5348B29C8362703B94F9--