From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Feb 18 21:52:14 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7C1CB445 for ; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 21:52:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-pa0-f44.google.com (mail-pa0-f44.google.com [209.85.220.44]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 530C696D for ; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 21:52:14 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-pa0-f44.google.com with SMTP id kp1so3024286pab.31 for ; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 13:52:13 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=odLsgT0hDiI77PbtRpKR0OClJaCTSm/PwF8afCpTdOQ=; b=PV6FVQ8qloNzO1LPIDJx9sTKTsqN99cDHjJlcgpgwXG92d2yUyqwk23Af5LYaT8wrT XzcqGx1VtEtcg+awwebf1tu9Jnqoese+yW7PpQ9p9Z4m0J/HqmngykYeZeut7fmH4t15 4lhfIxZKWbaRRzJbTs6eNi9fYs0eoN08faabk= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type :x-gm-message-state; bh=odLsgT0hDiI77PbtRpKR0OClJaCTSm/PwF8afCpTdOQ=; b=mdsjLLPUMz4PKUPtvR+Tzm+GUl3oqs1jNDiWoCWbUiIa6VK4UnWRfvVpVyYwLVUmie hv8J97H2TONu3l9Gwj8N/V87cHDBgLgEA2Y9B3CLVwaSGjinYY4ZP+9H5nrxnM5GIAkY N9yof0eq6dnPOzSLILZHXPzT+7CfduxAbe18wMC5h3P8CUY0zhXWITg8dof7SJAl2CwV MMx+c1bX2Bhvv1bY4oJp4Ja9Yh03LOc6zEyX4wg0aCtoMLHta6h0IXWIIe0vDhcbjZ3L yuM4W8bBYYE3QBExN20YtOgLFxEzRAQDjDUMoo+KdbeWQ6iGVhl0O7lDyPeW+xiL/Jlj La0A== X-Received: by 10.68.201.227 with SMTP id kd3mr33598133pbc.65.1361224333523; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 13:52:13 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.66.158.169 with HTTP; Mon, 18 Feb 2013 13:51:43 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: References: <201302181954.r1IJsLmd095109@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Mon, 18 Feb 2013 16:51:43 -0500 X-Google-Sender-Auth: M1QMyZvYTjlFKh0DcCEs8a-6Ri8 Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors To: Benjamin Kaduk Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQk7RpYxsAFjhKI1ZEfoKfHGuIwfeVEL49zq0UWiJ3i49g3Bt5kemnSsbY5ExX/v4AVeQizZ Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 18 Feb 2013 21:52:14 -0000 On 18 February 2013 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > How is refusing bin and usr.bin relevant for people who only know English > and German (the part of the text above the quoted portion)? Ugh. In trying to preserve the useful portions of the documentation I trimmed too little. I'll re-read the document and see what else I could trim or re-write >> - With this very useful feature, those users who are on >> + With this very feature, those users who are on > > Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a useful > feature? ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly consistent with > our style.) Good point. I kept the wording that was there, but perhaps I should have been more aggressive. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams