From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jun 30 00:55:44 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2DE9D37B401 for ; Mon, 30 Jun 2003 00:55:44 -0700 (PDT) Received: from craig.afraid.org (h24-69-213-234.cc.shawcable.net [24.69.213.234]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 97AF543FBF for ; Mon, 30 Jun 2003 00:55:43 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from craig@craig.afraid.org) Received: from fireball.internal.lan ([10.0.0.2] helo=fireball) by craig.afraid.org with smtp (Exim 4.20) id 19WtVn-0005iK-68 for freebsd-doc@freebsd.org; Mon, 30 Jun 2003 00:55:43 -0700 Message-ID: <000701c33edd$022e7740$0200000a@fireball> From: "Craig Reyenga" To: Date: Mon, 30 Jun 2003 00:55:43 -0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2600.0000 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2600.0000 Subject: Small handbook error in section 12.9.8.2 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: Craig Reyenga List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 30 Jun 2003 07:55:44 -0000 Hi, I caught a small error in section 12.9.8.2 "After the Disaster", paragraph two: "If the hardware has been damaged. First, replace those parts that have been damaged." The first sentence is a fragment, I suggest it should read: "If any hardware has been damaged, replace those parts before attempting to use the computer." Or something to that effect. Just doing what I can :) -Craig