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Date:      Wed, 20 Apr 2016 12:31:38 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r48683 - head/share/xml
Message-ID:  <201604201231.u3KCVc06028994@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: wblock
Date: Wed Apr 20 12:31:38 2016
New Revision: 48683
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48683

Log:
  Miscellaneous spelling and contraction fixes.

Modified:
  head/share/xml/commercial.consult.xml

Modified: head/share/xml/commercial.consult.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/share/xml/commercial.consult.xml	Wed Apr 20 12:28:11 2016	(r48682)
+++ head/share/xml/commercial.consult.xml	Wed Apr 20 12:31:38 2016	(r48683)
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
       A-Team Systems has over 15 years of experience helping clients
       leverage the power of &os; in combination with other open source
       software such as PHP, MySQL and Apache in a secure, customized
-      and cohesive way.  We've been with &os; since version 1.0!  We
+      and cohesive way.  We have been with &os; since version 1.0!  We
       can help you with your existing deployment or future plans:
       From encrypted backups to web and mail servers.  Visit our
       <a href="http://www.ateamsystems.com/">website</a>; for more
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
       (Frankfurt/Main).  We have experiences with FreeBSD, Linux and Windows
       Servers.  Our business activities include hosting/homing, programming
       and webdesign.  We develop solutions for your intra-, extra- and
-      internet needs.  For more informations you can visit <a
+      internet needs.  For more information you can visit <a
       href="http://www.bpanet.de/">our website</a> or write an email to
       <a href="mailto:service@bpanet.de">service@bpanet.de</a>.
     </description>
@@ -1449,7 +1449,7 @@
       Ish provides IT management, network security, FreeBSD and MacOS X
       system administration services in Sydney, Australia.  We have
       designed and implemented BSD-based computer systems for a wide variety
-      of commercial customers, and we're available to provide troubleshooting
+      of commercial customers, and we are available to provide troubleshooting
       and advice for system administrators.  As a developer of web sites, our
       Java/WebObjects-based services are all hosted on FreeBSD servers.  Please
       call us for a chat on +612 9550 5001,
@@ -1476,7 +1476,7 @@
     <url>http://www.tecno21.com.br/FreeBSD/</url>;
     <description>
       We provide setup and support for FreeBSD, OpenBSD and Linux.  We have 10+
-      years experience with open source softwares on corporate and SMB
+      years experience with open source software on corporate and SMB
       customers.  We offer custom applications (C/C++/Java/C#),
       network infrastructure design, security, audit and smartcard solutions.
       Contact us via <a href="mailto:suporte@tecno21.com.br">e-mail</a> or
@@ -1721,7 +1721,7 @@
       and configuration, systems integration, performance tuning,
       disaster recovery, network architecture, programming, and
       general systems administration of FreeBSD, NetBSD, OpenBSD,
-      Dragonfly BSD, Linux and many commercial UNIX flavors.  For
+      DragonFly BSD, Linux and many commercial UNIX flavors.  For
       additional information, please visit our website at
       <a href="http:www.backwatcher.com">http:www.backwatcher.com</a>,
       email



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