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Date:      Mon, 30 Dec 2013 17:39:43 -0700 (MST)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r43404 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1312301735530.58780@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <201312301751.rBUHpsRX041814@svn.freebsd.org>
References:  <201312301751.rBUHpsRX041814@svn.freebsd.org>

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On Mon, 30 Dec 2013, Marc Fonvieille wrote:

> Author: blackend
> Date: Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013
> New Revision: 43404
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43404
>
> Log:
>  Add some missing <quote></quote> tags, and remove useless "".
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Mon Dec 30 17:10:07 2013	(r43403)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013	(r43404)
> @@ -1353,7 +1353,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
> 	    <row>
> 	      <entry>BSD</entry>
> 	      <entry>BSD Labels without an MBR, sometimes called
> -		"dangerously dedicated mode".  See
> +		<quote>dangerously dedicated mode</quote>.  See
> 		&man.bsdlabel.8;.</entry>
> 	    </row>
>
> @@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
> 	  for a 20G target disk.  If more space is available on the
> 	  target disk, larger swap or <filename>/var</filename>
> 	  partitions may be useful.  Labels shown here are prefixed
> -	  with <literal>ex</literal> for "example", but readers
> +	  with <literal>ex</literal> for example, but readers
> 	  should use other unique label values as described
> 	  above.</para>

On this one, there should be quotes.  It's not "for example" but 
"ex" standing for "example".  So

> +	  with <literal>ex</literal> for <quote>example</quote>, but readers




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