From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Aug 20 14:10:12 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 163A21065670 for ; Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0581C8FC08 for ; Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:12 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p7KEAB4V025474 for ; Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:11 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p7KEAB8n025467; Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:11 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:11 GMT Message-Id: <201108201410.p7KEAB8n025467@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Hans Petter Selasky Cc: Subject: Re: docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Hans Petter Selasky List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 14:10:12 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/159898; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Hans Petter Selasky To: Benjamin Kaduk Cc: "bug-followup@freebsd.org" Subject: Re: docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 16:06:05 +0200 On Friday 19 August 2011 17:22:08 Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > (was: Re: Fwd: svn commit: r224917 - head/lib/libusb) > > On Fri, 19 Aug 2011, Hans Petter Selasky wrote: > > On Friday 19 August 2011 05:40:46 Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > >> Dear Hans Petter, > >> > >> I saw a couple grammar and style issues as this went by, and ended up > >> going through the whole man page. Could you take a look at docs/159898 > >> and make sure I didn't change anything factually incorrectly? > >> > >> Thanks, > >> > >> Ben Kaduk > > > > Looks good! > > > > One more change I would suggest: > > > > +A convenience function to open a device with vendor and producd IDs > > > > Into: > > > > +A convenience function to open a device by vendor and product IDs > > > > --HPS > > Updated patch with comments from hps -- thanks for catching it! > > -Ben Looks good. Who will commit it? --HPS