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Subject: svn commit: r43969 - head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/contributors
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Author: ryusuke
Date: Mon Feb 17 14:42:18 2014
New Revision: 43969
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43969

Log:
  o Refine translation.

Modified:
  head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/contributors/article.xml

Modified: head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/contributors/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/contributors/article.xml	Mon Feb 17 14:27:59 2014	(r43968)
+++ head/ja_JP.eucJP/articles/contributors/article.xml	Mon Feb 17 14:42:18 2014	(r43969)
@@ -364,8 +364,8 @@
   <sect1 xml:id="staff-committers">
     <title>FreeBSD の開発者たち</title>
 
-    <para>(CVS の) commitする権利を持っていて、FreeBSD
-      のソースツリーについて 作業をおこなっている人々がいます。
+    <para>commit の権限を持っていて、FreeBSD
+      のソースツリーについて作業をおこなっている人々がいます。
       すべてのコアチームのメンバはまた開発者でもあります。</para>
 
     <para>(姓でアルファベット順)</para>