From owner-freebsd-doc Tue Jun 4 11:30:14 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 51C2A37B404 for ; Tue, 4 Jun 2002 11:30:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g54IU3i72876; Tue, 4 Jun 2002 11:30:03 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2002 11:30:03 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <200206041830.g54IU3i72876@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: From: Giorgos Keramidas Subject: Re: docs/38851: Some keycap tags addition and minor changes in section 3.8 of the Handbook Reply-To: Giorgos Keramidas Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/38851; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Marc Fonvieille Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/38851: Some keycap tags addition and minor changes in section 3.8 of the Handbook Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2002 21:03:54 +0300 On 2002-06-03 12:50 +0200, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > @@ -1256,9 +1256,9 @@ [Snippetry of patch part that looks nice.] > @@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ > emacs > > FreeBSD also comes with more powerful text editors such as > - vi as part of the base system, and > + vi as part of the base system, > emacs and vim > as part of the FreeBSD Ports Collection. These editors offer much > more functionality and power at the expense of being a little more > --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- The new line that is added has whitespace at EOL. This is not really important though. What is more important is that we'll probably have to rewrite parts of the sentence anyways. What about something like this? %%% @@ -1277,9 +1277,9 @@ emacs FreeBSD also comes with more powerful text editors such as - vi as part of the base system, and - emacs and vim - as part of the FreeBSD Ports Collection. These editors offer much + vi as part of the base system, while other editors, like + emacs and vim, + are part of the FreeBSD Ports Collection. These editors offer much more functionality and power at the expense of being a little more complicated to learn. However if you plan on doing a lot of text editing, learning a more powerful editor such as %%% - Giorgos To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message