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On 2004.12.16 10:27:55 +0800, David Adam wrote:

> >-    <para>All software-based firewalls provide some way to filter
> >+    <para>Firewalls makes it possbile to filter
>=20
> Should be "Firewalls make it possible to filter".

Thanks!

> I'm not really sure where the need to remove all references to firewalls
> being software (for example, "OpenBSD PF firewall *software*") came from.

In this case it was mainly a wording issue where I felt it "sounded"
better not including the word "software"...

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Simon L. Nielsen

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