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keramida    2002/04/13 18:50:51 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs article.sgml 
  Log:
  Round #1 of various updates/fixes to this article.
  
  In the bandwidth requirements section:
  - Properly finish sentences with fullstops.
  - Remove "probably" and similar words.  We shouldn't sound like we
    don't know if the requirements are true.
  
  PR:             docs/37037
  Submitted by:   Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.14      +3 -4      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml

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