From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 16 08:37:18 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4DCF316A4CE for ; Fri, 16 Jul 2004 08:37:18 +0000 (GMT) Received: from gandalf.online.bg (gandalf.online.bg [217.75.128.9]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with SMTP id BE3A743D7B for ; Fri, 16 Jul 2004 08:37:16 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from roam@ringlet.net) Received: (qmail 8888 invoked from network); 16 Jul 2004 08:32:56 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO straylight.m.ringlet.net) (217.75.134.254) by gandalf.online.bg with SMTP; 16 Jul 2004 08:32:56 -0000 Received: (qmail 70168 invoked by uid 1000); 16 Jul 2004 08:37:13 -0000 Date: Fri, 16 Jul 2004 11:37:13 +0300 From: Peter Pentchev To: Leonard Zettel Message-ID: <20040716083713.GD858@straylight.m.ringlet.net> Mail-Followup-To: Leonard Zettel , freebsd-doc@freebsd.org References: <200406032310.12551.zettel@acm.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="g7w8+K/95kPelPD2" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200406032310.12551.zettel@acm.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.6i cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Suggested rewrite of "FreeBSD Documentation Project: SGML" X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 16 Jul 2004 08:37:18 -0000 --g7w8+K/95kPelPD2 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1251 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Jun 03, 2004 at 11:10:12PM -0400, Leonard Zettel wrote: > http://www.lenzettel.com/freebsd/sgml.html >=20 > Questions, comments, criticisms? I like it at a first read, but it is somewhat difficult to see exactly what changes you have made (the ones in the first couple of sentences are obvious). Could you try to check out the FreeBSD Web site sources =66rom the CVS repository, edit the www/en/docproj/sgml.sgml file to include your changes, and then send us a patch (or at least your version of the sgml.sgml file) so we can comment on the changes themselves? :) Thanks for your efforts so far! G'luck, Peter --=20 Peter Pentchev roam@ringlet.net roam@sbnd.net roam@FreeBSD.org PGP key: http://people.FreeBSD.org/~roam/roam.key.asc Key fingerprint FDBA FD79 C26F 3C51 C95E DF9E ED18 B68D 1619 4553 If wishes were fishes, the antecedent of this conditional would be true. --g7w8+K/95kPelPD2 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.4 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFA95O57Ri2jRYZRVMRAuVrAKCNSfuSzzoTgCQeXNthmtXlKwMK/gCffTVB peE+93KbnhUpUd+WjB9cH5M= =Pp11 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --g7w8+K/95kPelPD2--