From owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Fri Nov 3 05:29:27 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ED8EAE6C7C7 for ; Fri, 3 Nov 2017 05:29:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from russ.haley@gmail.com) Received: from mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (unknown [127.0.1.3]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C40267CA30 for ; Fri, 3 Nov 2017 05:29:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from russ.haley@gmail.com) Received: by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) id C048DE6C7C5; Fri, 3 Nov 2017 05:29:27 +0000 (UTC) Delivered-To: doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF407E6C7C4; Fri, 3 Nov 2017 05:29:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from russ.haley@gmail.com) Received: from mail-lf0-x235.google.com (mail-lf0-x235.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4010:c07::235]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client CN "smtp.gmail.com", Issuer "Google Internet Authority G2" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 3E0447CA2F; Fri, 3 Nov 2017 05:29:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from russ.haley@gmail.com) Received: by mail-lf0-x235.google.com with SMTP id e143so1813684lfg.12; Thu, 02 Nov 2017 22:29:27 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-transfer-encoding; bh=/3joT84Jt7MsO2JLgzuQI6kdF0qi1gxvFmDst+/Ot0k=; b=N62pgfOpeLtMz8VIi8g3zBQ+z8w891HDx3h7qeURWxCPkkkw/weY0bCssP+X38QBdg AuLzOfZK/KKA2IgAyjz52WdDB6tEg8FM11SO065YApgugkfjeNLv/nnbi++T8WifCpqf B/lRB7IzTCpkskCfiiTQOm0Xfq3eK0k2GbGj2WNLBvAyXE2qzlI0egHRs9cGn3J/OoiJ d48DTaLhuzCqZaqhfpgyNvF8WwAEVP6E5cYgDBNS2noiFs+Do3pg7p4G4aFYRNbVuv+s FrcuRFkU1O6ndUzWL6IKH1AWQIsEnkDU5vRJkVBk4ZaUDi5c961ncveNXwgWkpXGiO3o Esuw== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc:content-transfer-encoding; bh=/3joT84Jt7MsO2JLgzuQI6kdF0qi1gxvFmDst+/Ot0k=; b=tOz2FShWMovTNrIBm39Uz2CNn2gTU27HtBKA3CWW4G7EAaG6BTPc3PGyZLpM/sSDeL jI6y/drFplApsmNFsgBL3vGYdsHzywCsimqwQPTzBescO14yq+l/+foIRF+/0qmVNWty STO4yGtJPoTdB3M+WfvoPQOugywtyr532oR7w2xWqpSYq2Tcoz5t5dQZD2Fdst0bg6yw TeMq0bWoD3ElFMoZcHirzd+8JIno97LEaNRqo0V3sTnFdO3426vJEPZvlCkUDAas4NKQ x6p8x2CnEiIK3UV8r8oA44hZWAonl+glMwn5eVX3B6qb8g/3Or0vVQ6LbXr8a9ETn8tn BUzw== X-Gm-Message-State: AMCzsaWpAcsrRBQ8CzLC/DYIPyKP8BaEF/dU1ncOFvaeHl2eBPw+yOvx qT3Y39Em/zRRCDl29qma39TdZBNe5SHlEolkWq1t7A== X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABhQp+QBP4VlNyg9qIraRXY3DzvTQQPqkYfde3v2HNZ+xKJPiY4Ek5yubWCZqtraWPbykN4ZFINzQUMfn+DvjHVU+lQ= X-Received: by 10.46.86.3 with SMTP id k3mr2337119ljb.97.1509686965143; Thu, 02 Nov 2017 22:29:25 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.46.14.1 with HTTP; Thu, 2 Nov 2017 22:29:24 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: <7b2f2464-5c35-e24a-2047-838c1a9e96a3@FreeBSD.org> <20171009224825.GM96685@kduck.kaduk.org> <20171011223253.GB96685@kduck.kaduk.org> <59DE9DD4.7010707@gmail.com> <20171011225205.GC96685@kduck.kaduk.org> <90385736-41f9-d640-2051-4604db6d18c7@mat.cc> From: Russell Haley Date: Thu, 2 Nov 2017 22:29:24 -0700 Message-ID: Subject: Re: Porters Handbook section 4.4 To: Mathieu Arnold Cc: doc@freebsd.org, freebsd-ports@freebsd.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 03 Nov 2017 05:29:28 -0000 On Thu, Nov 2, 2017 at 9:07 AM, Russell Haley wrote: > On Thu, Nov 2, 2017 at 5:13 AM, Mathieu Arnold wrote: >> Le 27/10/2017 =C3=A0 05:26, Russell Haley a =C3=A9crit : >>> Hello, >>> >>> I'm still stuck building the new chapters I wrote for the Porters >>> Handbook. >> >> >> Could you please create a review for your work on >> https://reviews.freebsd.org/, so that I can have a look at it as early >> as possible ? >> >> >> -- >> Mathieu Arnold >> > Sure! I didn't think anyone wanted a non-building pile of mess in a revie= w. :) > I'll see if I can get that up there this weekend. > > Russ Okay, I submitted what I have here: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D12921 A quick review of the work indicates I didn't include the comments made by Stefan or Matthew Seaman. I added everyone that on this thread that I thought would be interested. Night, Russ