From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Dec 31 00:39:51 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6AAF6CB1; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 00:39:51 +0000 (UTC) Received: from wonkity.com (wonkity.com [67.158.26.137]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 183641FAF; Tue, 31 Dec 2013 00:39:50 +0000 (UTC) Received: from wonkity.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by wonkity.com (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id rBV0dhJI058833; Mon, 30 Dec 2013 17:39:43 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Received: from localhost (wblock@localhost) by wonkity.com (8.14.7/8.14.7/Submit) with ESMTP id rBV0dhtF058830; Mon, 30 Dec 2013 17:39:43 -0700 (MST) (envelope-from wblock@wonkity.com) Date: Mon, 30 Dec 2013 17:39:43 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block To: Marc Fonvieille Subject: Re: svn commit: r43404 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall In-Reply-To: <201312301751.rBUHpsRX041814@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201312301751.rBUHpsRX041814@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (BSF 1167 2008-08-23) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.4.3 (wonkity.com [127.0.0.1]); Mon, 30 Dec 2013 17:39:43 -0700 (MST) Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 31 Dec 2013 00:39:51 -0000 On Mon, 30 Dec 2013, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > Author: blackend > Date: Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013 > New Revision: 43404 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43404 > > Log: > Add some missing tags, and remove useless "". > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Mon Dec 30 17:10:07 2013 (r43403) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Mon Dec 30 17:51:54 2013 (r43404) > @@ -1353,7 +1353,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is > > BSD > BSD Labels without an MBR, sometimes called > - "dangerously dedicated mode". See > + dangerously dedicated mode. See > &man.bsdlabel.8;. > > > @@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is > for a 20G target disk. If more space is available on the > target disk, larger swap or /var > partitions may be useful. Labels shown here are prefixed > - with ex for "example", but readers > + with ex for example, but readers > should use other unique label values as described > above. On this one, there should be quotes. It's not "for example" but "ex" standing for "example". So > + with ex for example, but readers