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Subject: svn commit: r46998 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal
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Author: matthew (ports committer)
Date: Thu Jul 16 20:08:27 2015
New Revision: 46998
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46998
Log:
Improve wording.
With hat: core-secretary
Submitted by: jonathan
Approved by: core (gnn)
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml Thu Jul 16 19:01:25 2015 (r46997)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/internal/code-of-conduct.xml Thu Jul 16 20:08:27 2015 (r46998)
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@
that what may seem to you to be a very mild statement can be
deeply shocking to another. Avoid contentious topics (unless
directly technically relevant). These things all have their
- places, but not when they are out of context
- here.
+ places, but not here, where they are out of context.
Try not to take offense where no offense was intended. Not
everyone speaks or writes English fluently. Not everyone can